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You have just received a credit card statement from your bank The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make Write a letter to the bank manager In the letter Introduce yourself Explain that you did not buy the items v.1

You have just received a credit card statement from your bank The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make Write a letter to the bank manager In the letter Introduce yourself Explain that you did not buy the items v. 1
Dear Sir or Madam, I am one of your bank’s Visa credit holder. I am writing to you Today to report an anonymous transaction added in my January 2020 credit card bill. I am very disappointed to see an unknown purchase list attached to my Monthly bill. Firstly, I was startled seeing my due amount for the first Month of this Year. Thus, I went through the bill and found five different charges of buying some items from various places in Denmark. I am confident it is not me because last whole month I was away from London to Italy on a business trip. I could submit some references of my presence at Italy as an evidence such as, flight to and fro tickets, hotel bookings. Consequently, I doubt someone has hacked my credit card details. Therefore, I want you to block my credit card immediately and do a diligence check on these transaction. After that, waiver these transaction from my bill and issue me a new bill reflecting my actual last month transactions with a new credit card. Thank you for your prompt action on this matter and fulfilling my request. Yours faithfully, Sayu
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am one of your bank’s Visa
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credit
holder. I am writing to you
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Today
to report an anonymous
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transaction
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added
in my January 2020
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credit
card
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bill
.
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I
am
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very
disappointed to
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see
an unknown
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purchase
list attached to my Monthly bill.

Firstly
, I
was startled
seeing my due amount for the
first
Month of this Year.
Thus
, I went through the
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bill
and found five
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different
charges of buying
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some
items from various places in Denmark. I am confident it is not me
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because
last whole month I was away from London to Italy on a business trip. I could submit
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some
references of my presence at Italy as an evidence such as, flight to and fro tickets, hotel bookings.
Consequently
, I doubt someone has hacked my
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credit
card
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
.
Therefore
, I want you to block my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
credit
card immediately and do a diligence
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
on these
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transaction
. After that, waiver these
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transaction
from my
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bill
and issue me a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bill
reflecting my actual last month
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transactions
with a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
credit
card.

Thank you for your prompt action on this matter and fulfilling my request.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Sayu
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have just received a credit card statement from your bank The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make Write a letter to the bank manager In the letter Introduce yourself Explain that you did not buy the items v. 1

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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