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A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: what the presentation was about, why the presentation was importanthow the book helped you. v.2

A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: what the presentation was about, why the presentation was importanthow the book helped you. v. 2
Dear John, I am writing this letter to thank you for the book that you gave me last month. Last week, I had a presentation in my department about how to develop manager software. The book that you gave me had a lot of things which supports my software. Firstly, I took some content for the main ideas that I will develop, such as how to arrange jobs, how to filter jobs, how to set priority jobs, and so on. The book gave me all the results of this software which I think about every all week. Secondly, for getting up my position in the company, this presentation is really important to me. However, I had a successful presentation because with your book I have a lot of ideas that make me get up my work. In conclusion, I would like to invite you to a restaurant near my house to thank you. I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Tom
Dear John,

I am writing this letter to thank you for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
that you gave me last month.

Last week, I had a presentation in my department about how to develop manager software. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
that you gave me had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
things which supports my software.
Firstly
, I took
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
content for the main
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
that I will develop, such as how to arrange jobs, how to filter jobs, how to set priority jobs, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
gave me all the results of this software which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about every all week.
Secondly
, for getting up my position in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, this presentation is
really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to me.
However
, I had a successful presentation
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
with your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
up my work.

In conclusion
, I would like to invite you to a restaurant near my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
to thank you. I look forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

Tom
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS letter A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: what the presentation was about, why the presentation was importanthow the book helped you. v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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