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Write a letter to a colleague asking for assistance setting up equipment for an upcoming presentation of yours Include What the presentation is about The equipment needed Suggestions to set it up v.2

Write a letter to a colleague asking for assistance setting up equipment for an upcoming presentation of yours Include What the presentation is about The equipment needed Suggestions to set it up v. 2
Dear Saad, I am writing this letter to ask for your help in setting up the mandatory equipment for my presentation next week in the main conference room. As you are aware that I just came from the recruitment trip after one week so, I have to give a presentation to the management about the outcome of the tour such as how many candidates we hired, total interview conducted, and rejections. Therefore, I am need of one mick, projector, and laptop to highlight the numbers in graphics as it will make them easy to understand the statistics. I must say that the trip was very fruitful, and we got to hire a total of 35 candidates for the key critical positions. Hence, I want to give them a thorough presentation with accurate numbers. Could you please help me to set up the projector straight in front of the screen and laptop on the right corner so, I could see them while giving my presentation as it would help me to answer their question easily. I look forward to a positive reply to catch up
Dear
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Saad
,

I am writing this letter to
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ask for
your
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help
in setting up the mandatory equipment for my
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presentation
next
week in the main conference room.

As you are aware that I
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just
came from the recruitment trip after one week
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so
, I
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have to
give a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
presentation
to the management about the outcome of the tour such as how
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many
candidates we hired, total interview conducted, and rejections.
Therefore
, I
am need
of one mick, projector, and laptop to highlight the numbers in graphics as it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them easy to understand the statistics. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
say that the trip was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
fruitful, and we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
to hire a total of 35 candidates for the key critical positions.
Hence
, I want to give them a thorough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
presentation
with accurate numbers.

Could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to set up the projector straight in front of the screen and laptop on the right corner
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
them while giving my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
presentation
as it would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to answer their question
easily
.

I look forward to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
reply to catch up
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to a colleague asking for assistance setting up equipment for an upcoming presentation of yours Include What the presentation is about The equipment needed Suggestions to set it up v. 2

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
183 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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