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Your local council have asked locals suggestions in how to keep the city cleaner. Write a letter to council. In the letter, you should: •explain what the council can do•what the people can do•tell how the community will benefit by keeping the city cle v.2

Your local council have asked locals suggestions in how to keep the city cleaner. Write a letter to council. In the letter, you should: •explain what the council can do•what the people can do•tell how the community will benefit by keeping the city cle v. 2
Respected John, I received letter from council yesterday and was asked to share suggestion for city cleaning. I intend to write this letter to share my views and recommendations in this regard. First and foremost, council needs to schedule daily garbage van visits to the whole council community. This enforcement would ensure timely garbage collection from every council house resulting in cleaner streets and homes. I truly believe that clearing is not only government responsibility, rather every individual is equally accountable. Residents should take the ownership to ensure cleanness around their area and dispose off rubbish to a designated area of submit to garbage van timely. Furthermore, one week day should be assigned and named as “ weekly cleaning day” in which every resident participate in streets and parks cleaning. No one can deny the innumerable benefits of clean city and surroundings. This activity would encourage more tourists and reduce environmental pollution resulting in healthy environment and healthy people. I am sure you would take my suggestions under consideration. Yours Sincerely, Sam
Respected John,

I received letter from council yesterday and
was asked
to share suggestion for city cleaning. I intend to write this letter to share my views and recommendations in this regard.
First
and foremost, council needs to schedule daily garbage van visits to the whole council community. This enforcement would ensure timely garbage collection from every council
house
resulting in cleaner streets and homes.

I
truly
believe that clearing is not
only
government
responsibility,
rather
every individual is
equally
accountable. Residents should take the ownership to ensure cleanness around their area and dispose off rubbish to a designated area of submit to garbage van timely.
Furthermore
, one week day should
be assigned
and named as
weekly cleaning day” in which every resident participate in streets and parks cleaning.

No one can deny the innumerable benefits of clean city and surroundings. This activity would encourage more tourists and
reduce
environmental pollution resulting in healthy environment and healthy
people
.

I am sure you would take my suggestions under consideration.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Sam
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his own language, that goes to his heart.
Nelson Mandela

IELTS letter Your local council have asked locals suggestions in how to keep the city cleaner. Write a letter to council. In the letter, you should: •explain what the council can do•what the people can do•tell how the community will benefit by keeping the city cle v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resources: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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