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You want to sell some of your furniture. you think a friends of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter, In your letter1. explain why are you selling2. describe the furniture3. suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture. beg v.6

You want to sell some of your furniture. you think a friends of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter, In your letter1. explain why are you selling2. describe the furniture3. suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture. beg v. 6
Dear Eric, How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to you because I think you may be interested in my furniture that I am going to sell. You may be wander why am I selling my furinture. Let me explain it for you. As you know, I was perparing for my immigration to Australia. Luckily, all my efforts paid off. I received my vise granting letter last week. I decided to move to sydney next month; therefore, I am selling my furniture. Since you visited my house several time, you know I have many fine furniture. I am selling a set of table and chairs made from red hard wood, a bed with matress and a study desk made from mahogeny. You complimented on my furniture during you last visit; thus, I considered you first when I was think to sell these furniture. Please write to tell me if you are interested. You can come and see these furniture anytime you want because I am free these days. Besides, I can offer you a compelling price once you are interested in these furniture. All the best Jim Pan
Dear Eric,

How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to you
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because
I
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think
you may
be interested
in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
that I am going to sell.

You
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may be
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wander
why am I selling my
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furinture
.
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Let
me
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explain
it for you. As you know, I was
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perparing
for my immigration to Australia. Luckily, all my efforts paid off. I received my vise granting letter last week. I decided to
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move
to
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sydney
next
month;
therefore
, I am selling my furniture.

Since you visited my
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house
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several time
, you know I have
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many
fine
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furniture
. I am selling a set of table and chairs made from red
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hard
wood, a bed with
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matress
and a study desk made from
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mahogeny
. You complimented on my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
during you last visit;
thus
, I considered you
first
when I was
Consider using a past participle here: "thought".
think
to sell
Did you mean "this furniture" or "these furnitures"?
these furniture
.

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Please
write to
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tell
me if you
are interested
. You can
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come
and
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see
these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
anytime you want
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because
I am free these days.
Besides
, I can offer you a compelling price once you
are interested
in
Did you mean "this furniture" or "these furnitures"?
these furniture
.

All the best

Jim Pan
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS letter You want to sell some of your furniture. you think a friends of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter, In your letter1. explain why are you selling2. describe the furniture3. suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture. beg v. 6

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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