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You feel that the streets around your neighborhood are too dirty and have toomuch rubbish. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, you should: • say who you are• explain the problem and its effects on your life• give suggestions on how t v.2

You feel that the streets around your neighborhood are too dirty and have toomuch rubbish. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, you should: • say who you are• explain the problem and its effects on your life• give suggestions on how t v. 2
Dear Sir, My name is Paul Smith. I reside in 4th road, Juhu. I am writing to inform you about the streets around my neighborhood which are too dirty and unhygienic. Everyday too much of trash is dumped by the local people without caring about the hygiene issues. This is because of less number of dustbins on the streets. There are street hawkers and other people making it miserable for the neighborhood residents to live. In spite of several warnings, they do not tend to change and continue their daily business on the street. Moreover, this has increased number of illness in the locality and I assert that, I may fall sick too. This is only because of unhygienic conditions around the area. I request you to kindly take necessary action on this muddle as it may give rise to more ill people in and around the community. Many residents have shown interest to protest against such people. However, we would like your participation as well. Residents have decided that along with the concerned authorities will create public awareness around the neighborhood for hygiene and eco friendly environment. At the same time, would request you to have more dumping dustbins around the neighborhood so that the garbage doesn' t come out of the pit. This will help to create a clean and healthier society. Lastly, removing street hawkers will also play a vital role to avoid unhygienic condition around the area. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Paul Smith
Dear Sir,

My name is Paul Smith. I reside in 4th road,
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Juhu
. I am writing to inform you about the
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streets
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around
my
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neighborhood
which are too dirty and unhygienic.

'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
Everyday
too much of trash
is dumped
by the local
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people
without caring about the hygiene issues. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of less number of dustbins on the
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streets
. There are
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street
hawkers and other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
making it miserable for the
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neighborhood
residents to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
.
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In spite of
several warnings, they do not tend to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
and continue their daily business on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
street
.
Moreover
, this has increased number of illness in the locality and I assert that, I may fall sick too. This is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
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because
of unhygienic conditions
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around
the area.

I request you to kindly take necessary action on this muddle as it may give rise to more ill
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people
in and
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around
the community.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
residents have shown interest to protest against such
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people
.
However
, we would like your participation
as well
. Residents have decided that along with the concerned authorities will create public awareness
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
around
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
neighborhood
for hygiene and
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
eco friendly
environment. At the same time, would request you to have more dumping dustbins
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
around
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
neighborhood
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that the garbage
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doesn&
#039; t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
out of the pit. This will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to create a clean and healthier society.
Lastly
, removing
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street
hawkers will
also
play a vital role to avoid unhygienic condition
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
around
the area.

Looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Paul Smith
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter You feel that the streets around your neighborhood are too dirty and have toomuch rubbish. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, you should: • say who you are• explain the problem and its effects on your life• give suggestions on how t v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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