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Your landlord wants to increase the rent Write a letter to him telling him why you think rent should not be increased and what will you do if it s increased v.2

Your landlord wants to increase the rent Write a letter to him telling him why you think rent should not be increased and what will you do if it s increased v. 2
Dear Mr. Kumar, I am writing to request you to keep the rent unchanged for the coming year, unlike your yearly policy to increase it by 10%. I am staying at flat 102, Murlidhar apartment. Having stayed here for 3 years, its been like a known feeling for me. Every year there has been an increment of 10% in the rent and I have adhered to it, but this time I am requesting you to not to increase it. There has been a reduction of rent in nearby areas and people have managed to get it at reduced prices. Since I am staying at this place from a long time and paying the rent regularly, I would not like to get the rent reduced nor increased. If you still wish to increase the rent, I would be forced to search for a new Landlord. The increased amount will not be in my affordable range, and I will have to look for the new place. If you have any concern, do let me know Hoping for a positive reply. Yours sincerely John Patel.
Dear Mr. Kumar,

I am writing to request you to
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keep
the
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rent
unchanged for the coming year, unlike your yearly policy to increase it by 10%.

I am staying at flat 102,
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Murlidhar
apartment. Having stayed here for 3 years,
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its
been like a known feeling for me. Every year there has been an increment of 10% in the
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rent
and I have adhered to it,
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but
this time I am requesting you
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to


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not
to increase it.

There has been a reduction of
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rent
in nearby areas and
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people
have managed to
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get
it at
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reduced
prices. Since I am staying at this place from a long time and paying the
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rent
regularly
, I would not like to
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get
the
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rent
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reduced
nor increased. If you
still
wish to increase the
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rent
, I would
be forced
to search for a new Landlord. The increased amount will not be in my affordable range, and I will
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have to
look for the new place.

If you have any concern, do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know

Hoping for a
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positive
reply.

Yours
sincerely


John Patel.
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6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter Your landlord wants to increase the rent Write a letter to him telling him why you think rent should not be increased and what will you do if it s increased v. 2

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  American English
9 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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