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Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation. In your letter, you should tell: – why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased– what you will do if it is increased. v.2

Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation. In your letter, you should tell: – why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased– what you will do if it is increased. v. 2
Dear Mr. Johnson, I am writing to you in response to your letter regarding the rental increment. I have a few concerns and let me explain them. I have stayed in this house for the past seven years and been a good tenant paying you the rent sharply before the due dates. Moreover, I take good care of sanitation, clean and good repair of the rental unit. As per the council of housing, based on the housing measures and locality, the rent which I am paying now is exclusively high. In such a case, increasing the rent will be intolerable and it will be against the tenant law. Furthermore, if you demand high rent I don' t have any option rather than vacating the house. Because, the house as only one bedroom, a kitchen and it was far away from the city centre. For such a place the money you demanding was too pricey. Being a generous person, I hope you would understand the concerns and practical possibilities in it. I look forward to hearing from you. Regards, Valli
Dear Mr. Johnson,

I am writing to you in response to your letter regarding the rental increment. I have a few concerns and
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have stayed in this
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for the past seven years and been a
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tenant paying you the
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rent
sharply
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before
the due dates.
Moreover
, I take
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good
care of sanitation, clean and
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good
repair of the rental unit.

As per the council of housing, based on the housing measures and locality, the
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rent
which I am paying
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now
is exclusively high. In such a case, increasing the
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rent
will be intolerable and it will be against the tenant law.

Furthermore
, if you demand high
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rent
I
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than vacating the
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.
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, the
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one bedroom, a kitchen and it was far away from the city
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. For such a place the money
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was too pricey.

Being a generous person, I hope you would understand the concerns and practical possibilities in it.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Regards,

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Valli
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If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his own language, that goes to his heart.
Nelson Mandela

IELTS letter Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation. In your letter, you should tell: – why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased– what you will do if it is increased. v. 2

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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