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You are unable to pay your rent due to some financial problems you are facing. Write a letter to your landlord telling himWhy you are writing himWhy you are unable to pay your rentWhen you will be able to pay your rent v.2

You are unable to pay your rent due to some financial problems you are facing. Write a letter to your landlord telling himWhy you are writing himWhy you are unable to pay your rentWhen you will be able to pay your rent v. 2

Dear Mr Bells, I am writing to apologise for my inability to pay for the month' s rent due to some financial challenges I am currently facing. I am writing an important professional examination this month which is dependent on my promotion at my workplace. This is a part of my end of year appraisal, and as a result, I had taken some preparatory classes to enable me excel and I have spent a lot. Hopefully, I will be paying you two months rent by the end of the month when I receive my salary. I deeply regret any inconveniences this might have caused you. I will be grateful if you will oblige me this opportunity. Hoping to get a positive feedback from you soonest. . Yours sincerely, Ms Jane.

Dear Mr Bells,

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end
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some
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Hopefully
, I will be paying you two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
months
 rent by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 when I receive my salary. I deeply
 regret any inconveniences this might have caused you.

I will be grateful if you will oblige me this opportunity. Hoping to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 feedback from you soonest. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.


Yours sincerely
,

Ms Jane. 

2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You are unable to pay your rent due to some financial problems you are facing. Write a letter to your landlord telling himWhy you are writing himWhy you are unable to pay your rentWhen you will be able to pay your rent v. 2

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

130 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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