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You are unable to pay your rent due to some financial problems you are facing. Write a letter to your landlord telling himWhy you are writing himWhy you are unable to pay your rentWhen you will be able to pay your rent v.2

You are unable to pay your rent due to some financial problems you are facing. Write a letter to your landlord telling himWhy you are writing himWhy you are unable to pay your rentWhen you will be able to pay your rent v. 2
Dear Mr Bells, I am writing to apologise for my inability to pay for the month' s rent due to some financial challenges I am currently facing. I am writing an important professional examination this month which is dependent on my promotion at my workplace. This is a part of my end of year appraisal, and as a result, I had taken some preparatory classes to enable me excel and I have spent a lot. Hopefully, I will be paying you two months rent by the end of the month when I receive my salary. I deeply regret any inconveniences this might have caused you. I will be grateful if you will oblige me this opportunity. Hoping to get a positive feedback from you soonest. . Yours sincerely, Ms Jane.
Dear Mr Bells,

I am writing to
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apologise
for my inability to pay for the
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month&
#039; s rent due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
financial challenges I am
currently
facing.

I am writing an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
professional examination this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
which is dependent on my promotion at my workplace. This is a part of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of year appraisal, and
as a result
, I had taken
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
preparatory classes to enable me excel and I have spent a lot.

Hopefully
, I will be paying you two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
months
rent by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
when I receive my salary. I
deeply
regret any inconveniences this might have caused you.

I will be grateful if you will oblige me this opportunity. Hoping to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
feedback from you soonest.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.


Yours
sincerely
,

Ms Jane.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You are unable to pay your rent due to some financial problems you are facing. Write a letter to your landlord telling himWhy you are writing himWhy you are unable to pay your rentWhen you will be able to pay your rent v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
130 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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