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A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him her on your next holiday You are too busy to accept the invitation Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank him her for the invitation Explain why you cannot come As v.1

A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him her on your next holiday You are too busy to accept the invitation Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank him her for the invitation Explain why you cannot come As v. 1
Dear Himadri, It is so good to hear from you after a long time. I hope you are in the best of spirits. I am writing to thank you for your warm invitation. However, unfortunately, I am sorry I won' t be able to spend my next holiday with you, as I have to prepare for my IELTS examination. Let me explain my situation here. I have recently decided to explore better opportunities in Canada. I will be planning for immigration i. e. Permanent residency visa and that requires IELTS examination to access the English language level. It requires tremendous hard work and study hence I am declining your invitation as it will be hectic study schedule. Could you let me know if any other time would be possible for you? I would certainly love to visit you and very keen on meeting your handsome son. I am also interested in seeing the new apartment you have recently moved into. I will be free during New Year' s Eve, by then my IELTS results will also be declared. I would definitely to cherish your warm hospitality. Please let me know. Your loving friend, Tina.
Dear
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Himadri
,

It is
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so
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good
to hear from you after a long time. I hope you are in the best of spirits. I am writing to thank you for your warm invitation.
However
, unfortunately, I am sorry I
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won&
#039; t be able to spend my
next
holiday with you, as I
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have to
prepare for my IELTS examination.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation here. I have recently decided to explore better opportunities in Canada. I will be planning for immigration
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i. e.
Permanent residency visa and that requires IELTS examination to access the English language level. It requires tremendous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work and study
hence
I am declining your invitation as it will be hectic study schedule.

Could you
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let
me know if any other time would be possible for you? I would
certainly
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love
to visit you and
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very
keen on meeting your handsome son. I am
also
interested in seeing the new apartment you have recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
into.
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I
will be free during New
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Year&
#039; s Eve, by then my IELTS results will
also
be declared
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would definitely to cherish your warm hospitality.

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Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know.

Your loving friend,

Tina.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him her on your next holiday You are too busy to accept the invitation Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank him her for the invitation Explain why you cannot come As v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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