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Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent. Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter. Describe the problem and why you are unhappy. Arrange for an engineer to visit your home. Request a reduction in your bill. v.2

Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent. Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter. Describe the problem and why you are unhappy. Arrange for an engineer to visit your home. Request a reduction in your bill. v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my disappointment with your internet service at my residence. I am working from home and my residential address is 26 Murlidhar Residency, Citylight, Surat 395002. I have purchased an unlimited internet plan which will offer 50 Mbps speed. Since most of the time the internet speed is less than 1 Mbps, I am not able to download and access important documents from my email. Hence, the irregular and slow internet service it is causing too much disturbance to my work. I request you to send the concerned engineer at my home latest by day after tomorrow. I have an online meeting with an international client after 2 days, so, I would like the problem to be resolved at the earliest. I am available at home from 10 a. m. to 5 p. m. Having given the plan and not receiving the desired internet speed and continuous connectivity from your company, I would like to get a 15% discount on my next month' s bill. I have used your plan from last 6 months and have not faced any such difficulty in the past. Hope my complain will be resolved at the earliest. I can be reached at 456(35645) and abc@gmail. com Yours faithfully John Patel.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my disappointment with your internet service at my residence.

I am working from home and my residential address is 26
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Murlidhar
Residency,
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Citylight
, Surat 395002.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
an unlimited internet plan which will offer 50 Mbps speed. Since most of the time the internet speed is less than 1 Mbps, I am not able to download and access
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
documents from my email.
Hence
, the irregular and slow internet service it is causing too much disturbance to my work.

I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
the concerned engineer at my home latest by day after tomorrow. I have an online meeting with an international client after 2 days,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, I would like the problem to
be resolved
at the earliest.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am available at home from 10 a. m. to 5 p. m.

Having
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
the plan and not receiving the desired internet speed and continuous connectivity from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a 15% discount on my
next
Possible spelling mistake found.
month&
#039; s bill. I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
your plan from last 6 months and have not faced any such difficulty in the past.

Hope my
The word 'complain' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "complaint"?
complain
will
be resolved
at the earliest.

I can
be reached
at 456(35645) and
Possible spelling mistake found.
abc@gmail
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com


Yours
faithfully


John Patel.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS letter Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent. Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter. Describe the problem and why you are unhappy. Arrange for an engineer to visit your home. Request a reduction in your bill. v. 2

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
212 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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