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Most countries allow 18 years old people to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other people think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. v. 1

Every youngster will be enthusiastic to drive a car from the day they become an adult of 18 years old. Most of the countries encourage an 18 old ones to start driving a car. But few persons think that is not the correct age to drive and it must be atleast 25. In my perception i disagree with the age limit to start at 25, In what view is explained to you in the following passage. In these days starting to drive a car did not need any age limit. It depends on one smartness and flexibility to drive. As we know every individual prefer to ride a car as means of transport to save their time in these busy days. So immidiately after getting maturity of age 18 they think to drive individually. Increasing 25 years as the boundaries of age to start driving is not necessary. In order to avoid accidents and wrong driving one must be well-known driving instructions and must follow all the rule. It does not depend on how young or old you are. Instead countries can take particular safety measures on road constructions. After having considered all the points that I have discussed above, we can come to a conclusion that before giving a driving license to a person all the regarding tests must be done correctly and should check whether they are following all rules and regulations carefully or not.

IELTS letter Most countries allow 18 years old people to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other people think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. v.1

Every youngster will be enthusiastic to
drive
a
car
from the day they become an adult of 18 years
old
. Most of the countries encourage an 18
old
ones to
start
driving
a
car
.
But
few persons
think
that is
not the correct
age
to
drive
and it
must
be
atleast
25. In my perception
i
disagree with the
age
limit to
start
at 25, In what view is
explained
to you in the following passage. In these days starting to
drive
a
car
did not need any
age
limit. It depends on one smartness and flexibility to
drive
. As we know every individual prefer to ride a
car
as means of transport to save their time in these busy days.
So
immidiately
after getting maturity of
age
18 they
think
to
drive
individually
. Increasing 25 years as the boundaries of
age
to
start
driving
is not necessary. In order to avoid accidents and
wrong
driving
one
must
be well-known
driving
instructions and
must
follow all the
rule
. It does not depend on how young or
old
you are.
Instead
countries can take particular safety measures on road constructions. After having considered all the points that I have discussed above, we can
come
to a conclusion that
before
giving a
driving
license to a person all the regarding
tests
must
be done
correctly
and should
check
whether they are following all
rules
and regulations
carefully
or not.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
Letter
4 paragraphs
237 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≤ 6
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