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Most countries allow 18 years old people to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other people think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. v.1

Most countries allow 18 years old people to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other people think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. v. 1
Every youngster will be enthusiastic to drive a car from the day they become an adult of 18 years old. Most of the countries encourage an 18 old ones to start driving a car. But few persons think that is not the correct age to drive and it must be atleast 25. In my perception i disagree with the age limit to start at 25, In what view is explained to you in the following passage. In these days starting to drive a car did not need any age limit. It depends on one smartness and flexibility to drive. As we know every individual prefer to ride a car as means of transport to save their time in these busy days. So immidiately after getting maturity of age 18 they think to drive individually. Increasing 25 years as the boundaries of age to start driving is not necessary. In order to avoid accidents and wrong driving one must be well-known driving instructions and must follow all the rule. It does not depend on how young or old you are. Instead countries can take particular safety measures on road constructions. After having considered all the points that I have discussed above, we can come to a conclusion that before giving a driving license to a person all the regarding tests must be done correctly and should check whether they are following all rules and regulations carefully or not.
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from the day they become an adult of 18 years
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. Most of the countries encourage an 18
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ones to
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few persons
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think
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drive
and it
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25. In my perception
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disagree with the
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limit to
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at 25, In what view is
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explained
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In these days starting to
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a
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car
did not need any
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age
limit. It depends on one smartness and flexibility to
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drive
. As we know every individual prefer to ride a
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car
as means of transport to save their time in these busy days.
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immidiately
after getting maturity of
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18 they
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individually
.

Increasing 25 years as the boundaries of
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is not necessary. In order to avoid accidents and
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wrong
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one
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be well-known
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instructions and
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follow all the
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. It does not depend on how young or
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you are.
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countries can take particular safety measures on road constructions.

After having considered all the points that I have discussed above, we can
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to a conclusion that
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before
giving a
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driving
license to a person all the regarding
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tests
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must
be done
correctly
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whether they are following all
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rules
and regulations
carefully
or not.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter Most countries allow 18 years old people to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other people think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. v. 1

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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