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You hired a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following: •when and where v.2

You hired a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following: •when and where v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have recently rented a car from your showroom at the Lavender’s street, Singapore for the duration of two weeks. while I was on my way to Johor Baru, I met an accident, unfortunately. To elucidate, on the signal intersection, a car suddenly came and banged my car just on the driver’s door. It was a narrow escape. Traffic policemen present their registered a complaint against the driver and all the damages which happened to my car while be taken care by that person as agreed by him. The cops have registered his insurance and driving license details and both the cars are in their custody. I am sorry for this mishappening but it was not at all my fault. I would like to request that a replacement vehicle should be offered as I have paid all the rent in advance. Your professionalism will be highly appreciated. Looking forward to getting a rapid response. Yours faithfully, Ben
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have recently rented a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
from your showroom at the Lavender’s street, Singapore for the duration of two weeks.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
while
I was on my way to
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Johor
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Baru
, I met an accident, unfortunately.

To elucidate, on the signal intersection, a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
suddenly
came and banged my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
on the driver’s door. It was a narrow escape. Traffic policemen present their registered a complaint against the driver and all the damages which happened to my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
while
be taken
care by that person as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
by him. The cops have registered his insurance and driving license
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
and both the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
are in their custody. I am sorry for this
Possible spelling mistake found.
mishappening
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it was not at all my fault.

I would like to request that a replacement vehicle should
be offered
as I have paid all the rent in advance. Your professionalism will be
highly
appreciated.

Looking forward to getting a rapid response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ben
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter You hired a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following: •when and where v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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