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Write a complain letter about a taxi service that you have used recently. Please say -when did you use the service? -what was wrong with the service provided -what actions for the improvement do you suggest? v.2

Write a complain letter about a taxi service that you have used recently. Please say -when did you use the service? -what was wrong with the service provided -what actions for the improvement do you suggest? v. 2
Dear sir or madam, I am writing to complain about a bad taxi service. Yesterday night, I booked one of your Swift Dzire cars through my mobile application, when I had been waiting at the intersection of Hill Road. It was driven by Mr Smith and having a vehicle no. PB 03 1234. Although I book this cab in solo riding mode, in between my way to the destination, another passenger was allowed by the driver to sit in. Despite my arguments, he did not give me any satisfactory answer. Besides that, while I was in haste to arrive at the airport, I was bound to wait for 15 minutes, because the cab was parked by driver unnecessarily as he went for smoking a cigarette. Even though I have already rated only one-star to your service in the Customer Feedback Form, it seems reasonable to complain in written to avoid such negligence. Due to harassment experienced by me, please warn the driver to never make such ridiculous mistakes again and refund the amount of taxi bill, which was $50, in my bank account, written on the cheque that I handed over to your driver. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Dheeraj Goyal
Dear sir or madam,

I am writing to complain about a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
taxi service.

This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, "last night" is used.
Yesterday night
, I booked one of your Swift
Possible spelling mistake found.
Dzire
cars through my mobile application, when I had been waiting at the intersection of Hill Road. It
was driven
by Mr Smith and having a vehicle no. PB 03 1234.

Although I book this cab in solo riding mode, in between my way to the destination, another passenger was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driver
to sit in. Despite my arguments, he did not give me any satisfactory answer.
Besides
that, while I was in haste to arrive at the airport, I
was bound
to wait for 15 minutes,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the cab
was parked
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driver
unnecessarily
as he went for smoking a cigarette.

Even though
I have already rated
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
one-star to your service in the Customer Feedback Form, it seems reasonable to complain in written to avoid such negligence. Due to harassment experienced by me,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
warn the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driver
to never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
such ridiculous mistakes again and refund the amount of taxi bill, which was $50, in my bank account, written on the
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
that I handed over to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driver
. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Dheeraj
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Goyal
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a complain letter about a taxi service that you have used recently. Please say -when did you use the service? -what was wrong with the service provided -what actions for the improvement do you suggest? v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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