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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter•describe the problems•explain how they are affecting peop v.65

People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter•describe the problems•explain how they are affecting peop v. 65
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the internet services provided by your company in our area. The disruptive internet connection is causing a great problem and I hope you will take necessary actions to resolve it as soon as possible. Before installing the router and internet connection from your company, the service provider assured us that uninterrupted services will be provided. However, this does not seem the case. As for the last couple of days we are experiencing extremely slow internet connectivity and sometimes it becomes unreachable especially during peak hours. Since most of the people in our locality including me, work from home where we have to complete the projects and submit to the customers within the deadline. Due to internet problems work is not completed on time and this affects the job. Furthermore, people are not able to do online shopping. I would suggest you to kindly send someone and get the problem fixed as soon as possible. If required, kindly install new cables in the locality which will help to provide strong internet connectivity to the society. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration and will get this issue resolved. Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the internet services provided by your
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company
in our area. The disruptive internet connection is causing a great problem and I hope you will take necessary actions to resolve it as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Before
installing the router and internet connection from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, the service provider assured us that uninterrupted services will
be provided
.
However
, this does not seem the case. As for the last couple of days we are experiencing
extremely
slow internet connectivity and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
it becomes unreachable
especially
during peak hours.

Since most of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in our locality including me, work from home where we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
complete the projects and submit to the customers within the deadline. Due to internet problems work is not completed on time and this affects the job.
Furthermore
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are not able to do online shopping.

I would suggest you to kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
someone and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the problem
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible. If required, kindly install new cables in the locality which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to provide strong internet connectivity to the society.

I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration and will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
this issue resolved.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Prabhpreet
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Kaur
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter•describe the problems•explain how they are affecting peop v. 65

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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