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on a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. in your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the in v.8

on a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. in your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the in v. 8
dear sir, I am writing this letter to you regarding to get insurance which I have lost my laptop during last week holiday trip. To begin with, last week we went to Goa holiday trip which held on 24th August and we stayed on luxuries hotel then next day we went to beach and we have utilized beat to see nearest Island. Unfortunately I was carrying my laptop and I was sitting on the corner suddenly huge waves came and I lost my balance so my laptop felt down on the sea that one middle of the sea nobody expected this sudden issue happened. Luckily I have covered insurance for holiday trip and which one include for all the valuable items anything lost. I would like to apply insurance to recover my valuable item and please let me know what procedure I need to follow to get on the same. Also, please guide me to do step by step process to complete this. I am looking forward your reply. yours sincerly, john.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
dear
sir,

I am writing this letter to you
The phrase 'regarding to' is not correct. Use "regarding" or "regard to".
regarding to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
insurance which I have lost my laptop during last week holiday trip.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, last week we went to Goa holiday trip which held on 24th
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
August and
we stayed on luxuries hotel then
next
day we went to
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
beach and
we have utilized beat to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
A determiner is probably missing here: "the nearest".
nearest
Island. Unfortunately I was carrying my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
laptop and
I was sitting on the corner
suddenly
huge waves came and I lost my balance
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
my laptop felt down on the sea that one middle of the sea nobody
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
this sudden issue happened. Luckily I have covered insurance for holiday trip and which one include for all the valuable
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "items'" or "item's"?
items
anything lost.

I would like to apply insurance to recover my valuable item and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know what procedure I need to follow to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
on the same.
Also
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
guide me to do
Did you mean the adjective or adverb "step-by-step" (spelled with hyphens)?
step by step
process to complete this.

I am looking forward your reply.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
yours
Possible spelling mistake found.
sincerly
,

john.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS letter on a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. in your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the in v. 8

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
172 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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