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Write a letter to your friend about a job offer that can be suitable for him/her and say Describe the jobwhat are the facilities availablewhy this job suitable for him v.2

Write a letter to your friend about a job offer that can be suitable for him/her and say Describe the jobwhat are the facilities availablewhy this job suitable for him v. 2
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to pleased to pleased to congrats you to complete your PHD in digital computer. Also, I like to inform you that one vacancy is suitable for you in many company regarding research and development area for computing. As you know well, currently, I am working in India healthcare company as a multi national company. As of now 7000 people who are workig in my company. They are planning to hire who will fit in to research and analytics department and specially they are looking for PHD resources. Also I would like to inform that you will get lots of benefits such as bus transport facility, Food and health insurance all are free. Also, health insurance will cover your family members as well. You can expect good hike on each and every year. I know that you are very much intersted in research and development area and I hope definitely you will enjoy this job, Also, you can proove yourself on your right area. I look forward to hearing from you soon. your affectionately, john.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to congrats you to complete your
The more common abbreviation of the term 'philosophiae doctor' is "PhD".
PHD
in digital computer.
Also
, I like to inform you that one vacancy is suitable for you in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
regarding research and development area for computing.

As you know well,
currently
, I am working in India healthcare
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
as a
This word is normally spelled as one.
multi national
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
. As of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
7000
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who are
Possible spelling mistake found.
workig
in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
. They are planning to hire who will fit in to research and analytics department and
specially
they are looking for
The more common abbreviation of the term 'philosophiae doctor' is "PhD".
PHD
resources.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
I would like to inform that you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
lots of benefits such as bus transport facility, Food and health insurance all are free.
Also
, health insurance will cover your family members
as well
. You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
hike on each and every year.

I know that you are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much
Possible spelling mistake found.
intersted
in research and development area and I hope definitely you will enjoy this job,
Also
, you can
Possible spelling mistake found.
proove
yourself on your right area.

I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
your
affectionately
,

john.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about a job offer that can be suitable for him/her and say Describe the jobwhat are the facilities availablewhy this job suitable for him v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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