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Your friend's dog has recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter: Express your sympathyInclude memories you have about the dogInvite your friend to do something with youWrite at least 150 words. You do NOT need to w v.2

Your friend's dog has recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter: Express your sympathyInclude memories you have about the dogInvite your friend to do something with you You do NOT need to w v. 2
Dear Yaman, I hope you are doing very well. I’m completely speechless and sorry about what has been happened to your dog, Boby. I understand how much this issue is difficult for you, as, you spend more than 10 years with Boby. I’ve had plenty of great memories with Boby since I was living in the same neighborhood. I remember his reaction when I was getting back from school, it was incredible moments. There are lots of photos that remind me of that days. I know how much you were loving him, but this is the life we should pass such a heartbroken tragedy. Therefore, I' d love to suggest if you could accept my invitation to watch a movie in the city center cinema next to the main library on EX road on the 23rd of November. Once again I’m extremely sorry for your loss, and I look forward to seeing you soon. All the best Bilal
Dear
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Yaman
,

I hope you are doing
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very
well. I’m completely speechless and sorry about what has
been happened
to your dog,
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Boby
.
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I
understand how much this issue is difficult for you, as, you spend more than 10 years with
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Boby
.

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I
’ve had
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plenty
of great memories with
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Boby
since I was living in the same neighborhood.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
remember his reaction when I was getting back from school, it was incredible moments. There are lots of photos that remind me of that days.

I know how much you
The verb 'loving' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
were loving
him,
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but
this is the life we should pass such a heartbroken tragedy.
Therefore
,
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I&
#039; d
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love
to suggest if you could accept my invitation to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
a movie in the city center cinema
next
to the main library on EX road on the 23rd of November.

Once again I’m
extremely
sorry for your loss, and I look forward to seeing you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

All the best

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Bilal
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes
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IELTS letter Your friend's dog has recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter: Express your sympathyInclude memories you have about the dogInvite your friend to do something with you You do NOT need to w v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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