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write to your friend about your favourite movieWrite at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. v.2

write to your friend about your favourite movie You do NOT need to write any addresses. v. 2
Dear X, i' m just writing to tell you class=" about" > about my favourite movie. it' s a romantic movie called the notebook, its events runs on the 70' s class=" about" > about a girl from a high class loves a lower class boy during summer vacation in the countryside; however, her parents refuses this relationship and suddenly thy decided to end the vcation and take her away to the city. during that vacation they had a dream to buy a specific house and paint it in white and blue. A few years later, she got engaged and he left to join the army; his father bought the bought him the house as a gift. he came back from the military and started to renew the house after losing his father. His photo appeared in the newspaper and she saw it and went back to see him. I don' t want to illustrate to the end of the movie, I think you' ll like it and hope to watch it together. yours S. A
Dear X,

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loves
a lower
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boy during summer vacation in the countryside;
however
, her parents refuses this relationship and
suddenly
thy decided to
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end
the
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and take her away to the city.
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during
that vacation they had a dream to
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buy
a specific
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house
and paint it in white and blue. A few years later, she
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got
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engaged and
he
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to
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the army; his father
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as a gift.
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he
came back from the military and
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started
to renew the
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house
after losing his father. His photo appeared in the
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newspaper and
she
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saw
it and went back to
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see
him. I
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think
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watch
it together.

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yours


S. A
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes

IELTS letter write to your friend about your favourite movie You do NOT need to write any addresses. v. 2

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
175 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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