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You and a friend have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Congratulate him/her for also being acceptedAsk him/her if he/she would like to be your roommateDiscuss possible activities t v.1

You and a friend have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Congratulate him/her for also being acceptedAsk him/her if he/she would like to be your roommateDiscuss possible activities t v. 1
Dear Yaman, I hope you are doing very well, Firstly, I’d like to congratulate you on the acceptance to study Fine Arts at Nancy University in Paris. I really excited to see you there. As you may know, I also got acceptance to study Law at Lwise University which’s beside your university. I am just writing to ask you whether you do not mind if we share a flat nearby the university, hence, I have no connection there and to be honest it’s very difficult for me to trust any one to live with. By the way, there are some activities we can do together that will help us to cope with the new life. As I told you before, I had been working in an Arabic restaurant for more than 3 years, so I can cook some delicious food. Moreover, we can split the apartment cleaning based on our availabilities. And finally we can share the grocery expenses to save as much as we can. I look forward to catching up soon in Paris! Take care, Bilal
Dear
Yaman
,

I hope you are doing
very
well,
Firstly
, I’d like to congratulate you on the acceptance to study Fine Arts at Nancy University in Paris. I
really
excited to
see
you there. As you may know, I
also
got
acceptance to study Law at
Lwise
University which’s beside your university.

I am
just
writing to ask you whether you do not mind if we share a flat nearby the university,
hence
, I have no connection there and to be honest it’s
very
difficult for me to trust
any one
to
live
with.

By the way, there are
some
activities we can do together that will
help
us to cope with the new life. As I
told
you
before
, I had been working in an Arabic restaurant for more than 3 years,
so
I can cook
some
delicious food.
Moreover
, we can split the apartment cleaning based on our availabilities. And
finally
we can share the grocery expenses to save as much as we can.

I look forward to catching up
soon
in Paris!

Take care,

Bilal
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter You and a friend have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Congratulate him/her for also being acceptedAsk him/her if he/she would like to be your roommateDiscuss possible activities t v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
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