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You recently took a long vacation In your absence a friend did you a huge favor Write a letter thanking your friend In your letter Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to v.2

You recently took a long vacation In your absence a friend did you a huge favor Write a letter thanking your friend In your letter Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation You do NOT need to v. 2
Dear Yaman, I hope you' re doing well. I just wanted to thank you very much for taking care of my pets during my vacation. I really didn' t even expect you to allocate such a huge time to do so. As you may know, pets are not allowed to travel in any of Syrian aircraft due to security reasons, hence, I was seeking for companies to look after my pets during my long holiday, and all of them were far too expensive. Therefore, your great action saved me a lot of money and even effort. Thus, I was wondering if you please accept a small compensation regarding your amazing job during my absence, will be extremely appreciated as I know how much it was difficult. Once again, I extremely thankful for your great effort and I' m so sorry for any inconvenient that this issue made for you, looking to see you soon. All the best, Bilal
Dear
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Yaman
,

I hope
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re doing
well. I
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just
wanted to thank you
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very
much for taking care of my pets during my vacation.
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I
really
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#039; t even
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expect
you to allocate such a huge time to do
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so
.

As you may know, pets are not
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allowed
to travel in any of Syrian aircraft due to security reasons,
hence
, I was seeking for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
to look after my pets during my long holiday, and all of them were far too expensive.
Therefore
, your great action saved me
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a lot of
money and even effort.

Thus
, I was wondering if you
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please
accept a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
compensation regarding your amazing job during my absence, will be
extremely
appreciated as I know how much it was difficult.

Once again,
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I
extremely
thankful for your great effort and
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I&
#039; m
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so
sorry for any inconvenient that this issue made for you, looking to
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see
you
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soon
.

All the best,

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Bilal
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS letter You recently took a long vacation In your absence a friend did you a huge favor Write a letter thanking your friend In your letter Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation You do NOT need to v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
157 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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