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Writing task 1You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In you letter· Provide Information about yourself· Give details of your previous work experience· Say why the co v.2

Writing task 1You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In you letter· Provide Information about yourself· Give details of your previous work experience· Say why the co v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing the letter to apply for the Administration Assistant job, advertised in the newspaper The Hindu. My name is vishal anand, age 38 years old, live in Ghaziabad. I am double master candidate; the first degree Master in Economics, the second degree Master in Business Studies which fulfills the job criteria of the education. As far as question is concerned about an experience, I hold 10 years of experience in retail sector and worked as cashier in supermarket. However, upon not getting success, I moved to the customer service in bank and taken contract jobs of short term and long term basis. Currently, I am working in challenging position as manager in Oracle Company. In question to selecting me, I would say that an experience and education is the mandatory requirement which I am fulfilling. Moreover, the work location is near to me which will help me to do overtime if needed. It will save commute time and can give more time to company. I believe of getting reply soon. Sincerely Vishal anand
Dear Sir,

I am writing the letter to apply for the Administration Assistant job, advertised in the newspaper The Hindu. My name is
vishal
anand
, age 38 years
old
,
live
in Ghaziabad. I am double master candidate; the
first
degree Master in Economics, the second degree Master in Business Studies which fulfills the job criteria of the education.

As far as question
is concerned
about an experience, I hold 10 years of experience in retail sector and worked as cashier in supermarket.
However
, upon not getting success, I
moved
to the customer service in bank and taken contract jobs of short term and long term basis.
Currently
, I am working in challenging position as manager in Oracle
Company
.

In question to selecting me, I would say that an experience and education is the mandatory requirement which I am fulfilling.
Moreover
, the work location is near to me which will
help
me to do overtime if needed. It will save commute time and can give more time to
company
.

I believe of getting reply
soon
.

Sincerely


Vishal
anand
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter Writing task 1You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In you letter· Provide Information about yourself· Give details of your previous work experience· Say why the co v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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