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Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how is should be celebrated. Write a letter to your friend. Say what type of party should be held e. g themed, fancy dress, black tie eventSuggest a suitable venueMake re v.2

Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how is should be celebrated. Write a letter to your friend. Say what type of party should be held e. g themed, fancy dress, black tie eventSuggest a suitable venueMake re v. 2

Dear John Wishing you many happy birthday in advance! I am writing this missive to offer you some suggestion to make your special day more memorable. As you are going to enter on teenage, so, I would like to suggest to go for an themed party as our friend circle never had one and also give your party a unique taste. Ranjit-Avenue' s Bombay house is thr best place to have one such kind of party as their staff are well trained in their job and prices are also very reasonable. Having Dj aftrr some snacks will also give you respect in our friend circle, as dancing with girls will open up you asbteenager little bit and making your dream come true, so, planning to have Dj in your party is mandatory requirment. I hope we will have blast in your party, waiting for your call. Yours truly Anand

Dear John

Wishing you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 happy birthday in advance!

I am writing this missive to offer you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 suggestion to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 your special day more memorable.

As you are going to enter on teenage, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, I would like to The verb 'suggest' is used with the gerund form: "suggest going".suggest going
suggest to go
 for Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 themed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 as our friend circle never had one and also
 give your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 a unique taste. Possible spelling mistake found.
Ranjit-Avenue&
#039; s Bombay This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 is A determiner is probably missing here: "thr the best".thr the best
thr best
 place to have one such kind of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 as their staff are This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-trained
well trained
 in their job and prices are also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 reasonable.

Having Possible spelling mistake found.DJDoDrDADLDM
Dj
Possible spelling mistake found.after
aftrr
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 snacks will also
 give you respect in our friend circle, as dancing with girls will open up you Possible spelling mistake found.teenager
asbteenager
Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".littlebit
little bit
 and making your dream This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 true, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, planning to have Possible spelling mistake found.DJDoDrDADLDM
Dj
 in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 is mandatory Possible spelling mistake found.requirement
requirment
.

I hope we will have blast in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
, waiting for your call.

Yours truly


Anand

3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS letter Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how is should be celebrated. Write a letter to your friend. Say what type of party should be held e. g themed, fancy dress, black tie eventSuggest a suitable venueMake re v. 2

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

148 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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