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The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: · A brief introduction of yourself· Your experience and relevant skills· Why you want the job v.2

The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: · A brief introduction of yourself· Your experience and relevant skills· Why you want the job v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to you to express my interest for the position of librarian job especially during summer' s. Firstly, I am a first year student majoring in computer science and I got to know about this wonderful opportunity when I saw it on the announcement board posted outside our library office department. Secondly, I have worked as a part-time assistant in library department at my school mostly after school hours where I was in charge of managing student database which included issued and received date and was also responsible for putting the right books in appropriate sections of shelves. If someone would have crossed the due date, we always make sure to collect the fine from the person. Thirdly, I would be grateful to have such a wonderful opportunity knocking at my door because it would not only provide me financial assistance but would also be quite useful for me by indulging in reading books and articles. On top of that, all the above activities will make the best utilization of my free time during my summer holidays. I look forward to hearing back from you soon. Yours FaithFully FaizalReza
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to you to express my interest for the position of librarian job
especially
during
summer&
#039; s.
Firstly
, I am a
first
year student majoring in computer science and I
got
to know about this wonderful opportunity when I
saw
it on the announcement board posted outside our library office department.

Secondly
, I have worked as a part-time assistant in library department at my school
mostly
after school
hours where
I was in charge of managing student database which included issued and received date and was
also
responsible for putting the right books in appropriate sections of shelves. If someone
would have crossed
the due date, we always
make
sure to collect the fine from the person.

Thirdly
, I would be grateful to have such a wonderful opportunity knocking at my door
because
it would not
only
provide me financial assistance
but
would
also
be quite useful for me by indulging in reading books and articles.
On top of that
, all the above activities will
make
the best utilization of my free time during my summer holidays.

I look forward to hearing back from you
soon
.

Yours
FaithFully


FaizalReza
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: · A brief introduction of yourself· Your experience and relevant skills· Why you want the job v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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