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You are a regular customer at a supermarket in your town/city. You have recently noticed a problem with some of the products that you usually buy and you have decided to complain about this. Write a letter to the manager. In your letterExplain who you areD v.2

You are a regular customer at a supermarket in your town/city. You have recently noticed a problem with some of the products that you usually buy and you have decided to complain about this. Write a letter to the manager. In your letterExplain who you areD v. 2
Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction based on the recent items purchases from the newyork supermarket on the 20th Jan 2017. Firstly, being a patron of this supermarket, I always prefer to buy all the necessary items from here, Until the product I recently purchased on 20th January turned out to be a complete disaster for me. Secondly, I bought some accessories for my laptop and mobile phone from your store. Upon unboxing, I found them they are defective because I can' t hear the sound from the earphones and the charger proved to be useless because of its inability to charge my laptop. Thirdly, I expect you to either kindly replace the defective products or compensate me for the same. I would advise you to repeal and replace the defective items to avoid any unavoidable circumstances in the future. Best Faizal
Dear Manager,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction based on the recent items
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purchases
from the
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newyork
supermarket on the 20th Jan 2017.

Firstly
, being a patron of this supermarket, I always prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
all the necessary items from here, Until the product I recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
on 20th January turned out to be a complete disaster for me.

Secondly
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
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some
accessories for my laptop and mobile phone from your store. Upon unboxing, I found them they are defective
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because
I
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can&
#039; t hear the sound from the earphones and the charger proved to be useless
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of its inability to charge my laptop.

Thirdly
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
you to either kindly replace the defective products or compensate me for the same. I would advise you to repeal and replace the defective items to avoid any unavoidable circumstances in the future.

Best

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Faizal
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter You are a regular customer at a supermarket in your town/city. You have recently noticed a problem with some of the products that you usually buy and you have decided to complain about this. Write a letter to the manager. In your letterExplain who you areD v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
146 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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