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Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter– Explain why you are organizing the party. – Describe what you are planning to do. – Say how important it is to have your friend at the party. v.2

Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter– Explain why you are organizing the party. – Describe what you are planning to do. – Say how important it is to have your friend at the party. v. 2
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Dear Samar,

It has been a while
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now
since, our last call. I
really
miss hanging out together. You knew I was expecting a
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
baby and
I am
really
sorry that I
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couldn&
#039; t write
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before
, I was not feeling well the last months.

I had my delivery two weeks ago. I know you will be mad at me for not telling you earlier
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but
, It was an unplanned
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labour
. Doctor was not sure about my due day cause of
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some
complications.

I am well
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
and the baby girl is in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
health. I am planning a welcome party to my baby
next
week.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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purchased
bunting and balloons from an online store.
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I
reserved
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some
cupcakes and pastries from a nearby bakery.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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bought
my girl a lovely
The usual collocation for "dress" is "in" not "with". Did you mean "pink dress in"?
pink dress with
a gorgeous ribbon at the back.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am sure you will
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love
it.

The party will be at the backyard of my villa on Thursday afternoon.

You are the most
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important
person, I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
at this party no excuses. You are like a family to us.

I
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cann&
#039; t wait to
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see
you on
next
Thursday at 4: 00 in the afternoon.

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lots
of
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love
,

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2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter– Explain why you are organizing the party. – Describe what you are planning to do. – Say how important it is to have your friend at the party. v. 2

Letter
  American English
11 paragraphs
212 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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