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Your friend has just moved to a new house, you want to send him a gift. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should tell: •what you will send to him as gift•why you chose it as gift•how you will send it to him. v.2

Your friend has just moved to a new house, you want to send him a gift. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should tell: •what you will send to him as gift•why you chose it as gift•how you will send it to him. v. 2
Dear Jacob, I hope you' re doing good. I' m just writing to congratulate you on moving into a new house and beware of the arrival of your house-warming present. Remember last time we went shopping at R City mall? You were totally impressed by the hot air balloon showpiece in one of the stores. That' s what I' ve picked to gift you so that it will look cool on the new furniture set you are bringing in. You know what? It' s not just a showpiece but transforms into a small table lamp. How amazing is that! I couldn' t think of any better gift than that for your home. It' ll reside near the sofa set, also will shower ambient soothing light in dusky evenings. I' ve already asked the store manager to deliver it to your place. He will send it through an express mail within 3 days. By the way, I' ve given your new address and phone number. As soon as the delivery guy reaches, he shall call you. All the best. David
Dear Jacob,

I hope
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re doing
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good
.
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just
writing to congratulate you on moving into a new
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house
and beware of the arrival of your
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house
-warming present.

Remember last time we went shopping at R City mall? You were
totally
impressed by the hot air balloon showpiece in one of the stores.
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#039; ve picked to gift you
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so
that it will look cool on the new furniture set you are bringing in.

You know what?
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#039; s not
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just
a showpiece
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but
transforms into a
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small
table lamp. How amazing is that! I
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couldn&
#039; t
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think
of any better gift than that for your home.
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#039; ll reside near the sofa set,
also
will shower ambient soothing light in dusky evenings.

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I&
#039; ve already asked the store manager to deliver it to your place. He will
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send
it through an express mail within 3 days. By the way,
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I&
#039; ve
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given
your new address and phone number. As
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soon
as the delivery guy reaches, he shall call you.

All the best.

David
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS letter Your friend has just moved to a new house, you want to send him a gift. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should tell: •what you will send to him as gift•why you chose it as gift•how you will send it to him. v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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