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You are an international student and have borrowed a book from the local public library You left the book on a bus and when you contacted the bus company they could not find it Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation and asking what you s v.2

You are an international student and have borrowed a book from the local public library You left the book on a bus and when you contacted the bus company they could not find it Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation and asking what you s v. 2
Dear Sir, Last week, I borrowed a Political Science book from your library as I am preparing for UPSC exams. It was extremely useful so I always carry it with me. Yesterday, I got a call from my friend and we planned to study together, I found the book worth it, hence, I thought to carry it with me. While going to her home, I took a bus and unfortunately, fell asleep. When I wake up I realized that I have missed the bus stop and immediately rushed to the driver to ask him to stop the bus on the next stop but uncertainly, forgot to pick the book. When I rang the bus company the next day, they could not find it and suggested that somebody must have picked it up. Could you please let me know what I have to do now? Being an international student I do not have enough money, but of course, I will pay for a new copy of the book of it is necessary. Yours Faithfully, Jot
Dear Sir,

Last week, I borrowed a Political Science
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book
from your library as I am preparing for
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UPSC
exams. It was
extremely
useful
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so
I always carry it with me. Yesterday, I
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got
a call from my
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friend and
we planned to study together, I found the
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book
worth it,
hence
, I
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thought
to carry it with me.

While going to her home, I took a bus and unfortunately, fell asleep. When I wake up I realized that I have missed the bus
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stop
and immediately rushed to the driver to ask him to
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stop
the bus on the
next
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stop
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but
uncertainly
, forgot to pick the
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book
. When I rang the bus
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company
the
next
day, they could not find it and suggested that somebody
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must
have picked it up.

Could you
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please
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let
me know what I
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have to
do
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now
? Being an international student I do not have
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enough
money,
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but
of course
, I will pay for a new copy of the
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book
of it is necessary.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Jot
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter You are an international student and have borrowed a book from the local public library You left the book on a bus and when you contacted the bus company they could not find it Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation and asking what you s v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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