Dear Haider,
How are you? I can’t resist myself from writing you about the new place I have moved in last week.
You will be surprised to know that the house totally looks like your grandparent’s old house from the outside. I’m renting a two bed room apartment in the 2nd floor with a large balcony and I love how spacious all the rooms are. As the apartment is south-facing and no high raised buildings are nearby, sunlight and air are always creating a healthy atmosphere inside the house. However, I am thinking of replacing few of the furniture’s as they are too old fashioned.
The neighborhood is the center of all historic sites of the town and there are few restaurants which are opened all night what made me happy. Moreover, I have observed that most of the neighbors here are moderate minded and they are usually strict about keeping the area clean and tidy.
Why don’t you come by to stay over the weekend? I can promise you that I’ll take you to a number of touristic spots and will cook some authentic dish for you.
See you soon,
Shahla
Dear  
Haider
,
How are you? I can’t resist myself from writing you about the new place I have  
moved
 in last week.
You will  
be surprised
 to know that the  
house
  totally
 looks like your grandparent’s  
old
  house
 from the outside. I’m renting a two  
bed room
 apartment in the 2nd floor with a large balcony and I  
love
 how spacious all the rooms are. As the apartment is south-facing and no high raised buildings are nearby, sunlight and air are always creating a healthy atmosphere inside the  
house
.  
However
, I am thinking of replacing few of the furniture’s as they are too  
old fashioned
.
The neighborhood is the center of all historic sites of the town and there are few restaurants which  
are opened
 all night what made me happy.  
Moreover
, I have observed that most of the neighbors here are moderate  
minded and
 they are  
usually
 strict about keeping the area clean and tidy.
Why don’t you  
come
 by to stay over the weekend? I can promise you that I’ll take you to a number of touristic spots and will cook  
some
 authentic dish for you. 
See
 you  
soon
, 
Shahla
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