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You have recently moved into a new house You want to tell your friend about your good news Write to your friend In the letter Describe the house Describe the neighbourhood Invite your friend to come and see the house You do not need to write any addresses v.2

You have recently moved into a new house You want to tell your friend about your good news Write to your friend In the letter Describe the house Describe the neighbourhood Invite your friend to come and see the house You do not need to write any addresses v. 2
Dear Haider, How are you? I can’t resist myself from writing you about the new place I have moved in last week. You will be surprised to know that the house totally looks like your grandparent’s old house from the outside. I’m renting a two bed room apartment in the 2nd floor with a large balcony and I love how spacious all the rooms are. As the apartment is south-facing and no high raised buildings are nearby, sunlight and air are always creating a healthy atmosphere inside the house. However, I am thinking of replacing few of the furniture’s as they are too old fashioned. The neighborhood is the center of all historic sites of the town and there are few restaurants which are opened all night what made me happy. Moreover, I have observed that most of the neighbors here are moderate minded and they are usually strict about keeping the area clean and tidy. Why don’t you come by to stay over the weekend? I can promise you that I’ll take you to a number of touristic spots and will cook some authentic dish for you. See you soon, Shahla
Dear
Haider
,

How are you? I can’t resist myself from writing you about the new place I have
moved
in last week.

You will
be surprised
to know that the
house
totally
looks like your grandparent’s
old
house
from the outside. I’m renting a two
bed room
apartment in the 2nd floor with a large balcony and I
love
how spacious all the rooms are. As the apartment is south-facing and no high raised buildings are nearby, sunlight and air are always creating a healthy atmosphere inside the
house
.
However
, I am thinking of replacing few of the furniture’s as they are too
old fashioned
.

The neighborhood is the center of all historic sites of the town and there are few restaurants which
are opened
all night what made me happy.
Moreover
, I have observed that most of the neighbors here are moderate
minded and
they are
usually
strict about keeping the area clean and tidy.

Why don’t you
come
by to stay over the weekend? I can promise you that I’ll take you to a number of touristic spots and will cook
some
authentic dish for you.

See
you
soon
,

Shahla
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
Language comes first. It’s not that language grows out of consciousness, if you haven’t got language, you can’t be conscious.
Alan Moore

IELTS letter You have recently moved into a new house You want to tell your friend about your good news Write to your friend In the letter Describe the house Describe the neighbourhood Invite your friend to come and see the house You do not need to write any addresses v. 2

Letter
7 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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