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Your friend moved to a new house you want to send him a gift write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should tellWhat you will send him as giftWhy you choose this as a giftHow you will send it to him v.2

Your friend moved to a new house you want to send him a gift write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should tellWhat you will send him as giftWhy you choose this as a giftHow you will send it to him v. 2
Dear Dave, Hope this letter finds you in the radiant health and best of spirits. How are you settling in your new home? First of all, I would like to say sorry to miss your house warming ceremony, as I’d to tackle a last minute trouble in my office. Of course, I’ve already purchased your gift form on of the antique shop from my locality. Can you guess what it is? Well, it’s the 19th century clock made from Sal wood. I always knew how enthusiastic you were to have such items in your house. Besides that, this piece of equipment was completely hand made, and was refurbished recently. It’s colour is tan brown, and I thought it would be a perfect match for your living room with light creamy walls. Although I wanted to present it to you in person, I’ve too much of work pending, which needs immediate attention. However, I’ve already spoken with the local courier company and they will pick up the piece by Tuesday, and hopefully, you can hang it on your wall before the start of the next week. Just get back to me if you need any other information regarding the shipment. Best wishes, Jeet
Dear Dave,

Hope this letter finds you in the radiant health and best of spirits.

How are you settling in your new home?
First of all
, I would like to say sorry to miss your
house warming
ceremony, as I’d to tackle a last minute trouble in my office.
Of course
, I’ve already
purchased
your gift form on of the antique shop from my locality. Can you guess what it is? Well, it’s the 19th century clock made from Sal wood.

I always knew how enthusiastic you were to have such items in your
house
.
Besides
that, this piece of equipment was completely hand made, and
was refurbished
recently.
It’s
colour
is tan brown, and I
thought
it would be a perfect match for your living room with light creamy walls.

Although I wanted to present it to you in person, I’ve too much of work pending, which needs immediate attention.
However
, I’ve already spoken with the local courier
company and
they will pick up the piece by Tuesday, and
hopefully
, you can hang it on your wall
before
the
start
of the
next
week.

Just
get
back to me if you need any other information regarding the shipment.

Best wishes,

Jeet
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter Your friend moved to a new house you want to send him a gift write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should tellWhat you will send him as giftWhy you choose this as a giftHow you will send it to him v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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