Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

you have borrowed some books from university library but you have not returned write a letter to the library official and in your letter describe what happened express ypur sincere words of apology and pffer what you can do to make it up v.2

you have borrowed some books from university library but you have not returned write a letter to the library official and in your letter describe what happened express ypur sincere words of apology and pffer what you can do to make it up v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Navdeep Puri, dweller of Huston Street U. S. A, currently pursuing a post graduation diploma in Finance & Taxation in your university. I am inscribing this letter to apologize about keeping the books beyond the due date. Although I always respect all the rules and regulations of college, this time the situation is just out of control. Last week, when I was preparing for my final examination, suddenly I received a message that my grandfather was not well and hospitalized. I, immediately ran for hospital and by mistake, I carried borrowed books along with my luggage. Since my grand papa is in critical condition and there is nobody in my family to look after him, it is impossible for me to come to college and return the books. I understand other students also need this book and deeply apologize for inconvenience. I assure you that I would not show such kind of recklessness again and return the books by the end of this month. Please do not revoke my library privileges and I am ready to bear all the fine you impose on me. Thanks for your time and kind consideration. Yours faithfully Navdeep Puri.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am
Possible spelling mistake found.
Navdeep
Possible spelling mistake found.
Puri
, dweller of Huston Street U. S. A,
currently
pursuing a post graduation diploma in Finance
Possible spelling mistake found.
&amp
; Taxation in your university. I am inscribing this letter to apologize about keeping the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
beyond the due date.

Although I always respect all the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations of college, this time the situation is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
out of control. Last week, when I was preparing for my final examination,
suddenly
I received a message that my grandfather was not well and hospitalized. I, immediately ran for hospital and by mistake, I carried borrowed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
along with my luggage. Since my grand
In some contexts, this is childish language. Consider alternatives.
papa
is in critical condition and there is nobody in my family to look after him, it is impossible for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to college and return the books.

I understand other students
also
need this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
and
deeply
apologize for inconvenience. I assure you that I would not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
such kind of recklessness again and return the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of this month.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
do not revoke my library
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
privileges and
I am ready to bear all the fine you impose on me.

Thanks for your time and kind consideration.

Yours
faithfully


Possible spelling mistake found.
Navdeep
Possible spelling mistake found.
Puri
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS letter you have borrowed some books from university library but you have not returned write a letter to the library official and in your letter describe what happened express ypur sincere words of apology and pffer what you can do to make it up v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts