Dear James,
How are you? Hope everything going well in your life. I am writing to you to courier a parcel to your residential address for your new success in your life.
Initially, I was deliriously happy to know that you have finally purchased your dream house. There is no doubt, that your hardwork and dedication towards your work has put you on the top of a ladder. Apart from this, you have also organised a welcome party in your lovely house which unfortunately, I am unable to attend due to my official meeting scheduled on the same day
Secondly, I have decided to parcel you a huge art piece to you for your achievement. Besides this, the art piece I have choosed for you is handpicked by me. As, when I was on the travel to a meeting in china. Additionally, I went to china town market and there I saw this magnificent art piece of white horses.
It is really a mammoth and an unique piece. I just feel to keep it in my house but as you know I am still surviving in rented apartment. So, I thought it will best fit in your house.
At the end of the day, you will astonished to know that the seller of this masterpiece told me some exciting benefits of this piece. Indeed, it keeps the negativity of house far away as well as rising horses inclined to mean more success and happiness in life.
Lastly, I have made this shipments delivery directly into your residential address. Soon in couple of days you have to be ready to sign for a courier delivery as a valuable present from your dearest friend.
Furthermore, I have attached the tracking slip with this letter to track it' s location.
Do write to me also as well as your reaction towards this item.
Best regards,
Yasmin.
Dear James,
How are you? Hope everything going well in your life. I am writing to you to courier a parcel to your residential address for your new success in your life.
Initially
, I was
deliriously
happy to know that you have
finally
purchased
your dream
house
. There is no doubt, that your
hardwork
and dedication towards your work has put you on the top of a ladder. Apart from this, you have
also
organised
a welcome party in your lovely
house
which unfortunately, I am unable to attend due to my official meeting scheduled on the same
day
Secondly
, I have decided to parcel you a huge art
piece
to you for your achievement.
Besides
this, the art
piece
I have
choosed
for you
is handpicked
by me. As, when I was on the travel to a meeting in
china
.
Additionally
, I went to
china
town market and there I
saw
this magnificent art
piece
of white horses.
It is
really
a mammoth and
an
unique
piece
. I
just
feel to
keep
it in my
house
but
as you know I am
still
surviving in rented apartment.
So
, I
thought
it will best fit in your
house
.
At the
end
of the day, you will
astonished
to know that the seller of this masterpiece
told
me
some
exciting benefits of this
piece
.
Indeed
, it
keeps
the negativity of
house
far away
as well
as rising horses inclined to mean more success and happiness in life.
Lastly
, I have made this
shipments
delivery
directly
into your residential address.
Soon
in
couple of
days you
have to
be ready to
sign
for a courier delivery as a valuable present from your dearest friend.
Furthermore
, I have attached the tracking slip with this letter to
track
it&
#039; s location.
Do write to me
also
as well
as your reaction towards this item.
Best regards,
Yasmin.
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