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Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do Begin your letter as follows Dear Sir or Madam v.2

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do Begin your letter as follows Dear Sir or Madam v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to make an insurance claim under the terms and conditions of my travel insurance policy (#123456). On the recent holiday in Japan, I lost a valuable ring as a result of urgent evacuation from the hotel caused by the earthquake. The cost of the ring, as stated in the insurance agreement, is $900. This was a thin golden ring, with a snake engraved around and a sapphire, which I did not find upon return to the hotel. I searched carefully the floor and the nightstand on which it was left. Contact details of the hotel are attached to this letter as well as other information which you might need to settle this claim. I kindly ask you to respond to my request within 20 days in accordance with your policy. Should you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you and thank you in advance for your help. Yours faithfully, Ivan Ivanov (Mr)
Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to
make
an insurance claim under the terms and conditions of my travel insurance policy (#123456). On the recent holiday in Japan, I lost a valuable ring
as a result
of urgent evacuation from the hotel caused by the earthquake.

The cost of the ring, as stated in the insurance agreement, is $900. This was a thin golden ring, with a snake engraved around and a sapphire, which I did not find upon return to the hotel. I searched
carefully
the floor and the nightstand on which it was
left
. Contact
details
of the hotel
are attached
to this letter
as well
as other information which you might need to settle this claim.

I kindly ask you to respond to my request within 20 days in accordance with your policy. Should you have any questions,
please
do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you and thank you in advance for your
help
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ivan Ivanov (Mr)
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do Begin your letter as follows Dear Sir or Madam v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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