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Your town council has decided to demolish historic building due to lack of funds to renovate. Write a letter to your council man. In your letter, you should say: •why it is important to preserve historic building•how the funds could be generated. v.2

Your town council has decided to demolish historic building due to lack of funds to renovate. Write a letter to your council man. In your letter, you should say: •why it is important to preserve historic building•how the funds could be generated. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Adam Smith, a local resident in your district. I am writing to let you know about my dissatisfaction about the decision made by council to demolish the historic art museum due to insufficient funds. Let me explain. It is the only heritage left out in the town and have deep roots in the people' s hearts. Also, every year the school students in the town plan their excursion to the museum. Due to all these factors, it must be preserved for our future generations. We could start collecting a nominal fee from the visitors, which can cover the daily maintenance costs. Although there is budget for its renovation, we can spread out a word in the town to donate money for reestablishing it. I am sure this town will not fall back on its very old heritage. I hope you take it into consideration. Yours faithfully, Adam Smith
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Adam Smith, a local resident in your district. I am writing to
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you know about my dissatisfaction about the decision made by council to demolish the historic art museum due to insufficient funds.

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. It is the
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heritage
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out in the
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and have deep roots in the
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, every year the school students in the
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town
plan their excursion to the museum. Due to all these factors, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be preserved
for our future generations.

We could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
collecting a nominal fee from the visitors, which can cover the daily maintenance costs. Although there is budget for its renovation, we can spread out a word in the
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town
to donate money for reestablishing it. I am sure this
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town
will not fall back on its
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very
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old
heritage.

I hope you take it into consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Adam Smith
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter Your town council has decided to demolish historic building due to lack of funds to renovate. Write a letter to your council man. In your letter, you should say: •why it is important to preserve historic building•how the funds could be generated. v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
153 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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