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Your company has sent you to attend a course at college in a different country. You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say: 1. how did you lose the certi v.2

Your company has sent you to attend a course at college in a different country. You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say: 1. how did you lose the certi v. 2
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to you to ask if you would like to do me a favour to send me another copy of a certificate in your college. I just passed the tough exam of the course in your college and got the certificate several days ago. I was so glad that I booked the earliest flight to get back to my country. But unfortunately, I lost my baggage in the taxi when I got off the airplane and took a taxi home. There was nothing really important but the certificate. The certificate was really important to me because with its help I could get promoted in my company. I know it was all my fault to get it lost, but I will really appreciate your help if you send me another copy of a certificate by mail. Thank you in advance for your understanding and kindness. Looking forward to your reply! Sincerely, Pirlo
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to you to ask if you would like to do me a
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
to
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send
me another copy of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
in your college.

I
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just
passed the tough exam of the course in your college and
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got
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
several days ago.
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was
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so
glad that I booked the earliest flight to
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get
back to my country.
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But
unfortunately, I lost my baggage in the taxi when I
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got
off the airplane and took a taxi home. There was nothing
really
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important
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but
the certificate.

The
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certificate
was
really
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important
to me
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because
with its
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help
I could
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get
promoted in my
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company
. I know it was all my fault to
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get
it lost,
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but
I will
really
appreciate your
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help
if you
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send
me another copy of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
by mail.

Thank you in advance for your understanding and kindness.

Looking forward to your reply!

Sincerely
,

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Pirlo
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter Your company has sent you to attend a course at college in a different country. You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say: 1. how did you lose the certi v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
155 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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