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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: Describe the item you lost• Explain how you lost it• Tell t v.9

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: Describe the item you lost• Explain how you lost it• Tell t v. 9
Dear Sir, Hope you’re doing well. I am writing this letter to you regarding an urgent matter of I’ve lost while I was on holiday. My luggage has valuable items like: - A Rolex watch, - Some clothes and, - Mobile Phone While boarding the bus for travelling to the airport, a thief snatched the luggage from me. I have been in discussion with the nearby police station and explained them about the incident. They have already lodged the FIR against the thief and provided me with the copy of that FIR document. Before travelling, I have opted for travel insurance. Here, I greatly required your assistance and as per policy, could you please reimburse the designated amount to me for the lost items. I will share the original bills of the items along with the FIR copy. Thank you for your help and look forward to your reply Best Regards, Tanul
Dear Sir,

Hope you’re doing well. I am writing this letter to you regarding an urgent matter of I’ve lost while I was on holiday.

My luggage has valuable items like:

-
A Rolex
watch
,

-
Some
clothes and,

-
Mobile Phone

While boarding the bus for travelling to the airport, a thief snatched the luggage from me. I have been in discussion with the nearby police station and
explained
them about the incident. They have already lodged the FIR against the thief and provided me with the copy of that FIR document.

Before
travelling, I have opted for travel insurance. Here, I
greatly
required your assistance and as per policy, could you
please
reimburse the designated amount to me for the lost items. I will share the original bills of the items along with the FIR copy.

Thank you for your
help
and look forward to your reply

Best Regards,

Tanul
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: Describe the item you lost• Explain how you lost it• Tell t v. 9

Letter
  American English
11 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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