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You recently red an article in newspaper and come to know that article was written by your freiend. Since you don't have the contact details for your friend. Write a letter to newspaper and mention. - What is the article about? - Why you need contact d v.2

You recently red an article in newspaper and come to know that article was written by your freiend. Since you don't have the contact details for your friend. Write a letter to newspaper and mention. - What is the article about? - Why you need contact d v. 2

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request information about my friend whose recent article is published in your newspaper last Monday. The article was about the life of our professor who won the national awards due to his academic achievements. All the facts and information provided in this write-up are accurate except one, which is about his marriage date. I have tried to contact my friend several times to inform him about the wrong information but it seems his contact number has been changed. Therefore, I need help from your agency to provide me his updated information. I would really appreciate if you can get updated contacts details from your records and send me via email. I am sending my personal identity card along with this letter to preserve your privacy policy. I hope you will process this information as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Vivek Dhiman

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to request You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 about my friend whose recent article is published
 in your newspaper last Monday.

The article was about the life of our professor who won the national awards due to his academic achievements. All the facts and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 provided in this write-up are accurate except one, which is about his marriage date.

I have tried to contact my friend several times to inform him about the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it seems his contact number has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
. Therefore
, I need This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 from your agency to provide me his updated information.

I would really
 appreciate if you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 updated contacts This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 from your records and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me via email. I am sending my personal identity card along with this letter to preserve your privacy policy.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope you will process this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Yours faithfully
,

Vivek Possible spelling mistake found.HumanShamanDamianWhitmanDivanCaiman
Dhiman

2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You recently red an article in newspaper and come to know that article was written by your freiend. Since you don't have the contact details for your friend. Write a letter to newspaper and mention. - What is the article about? - Why you need contact d v. 2

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

148 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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