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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortnunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter- Describe the item you lost- explain how you lost it- tell the v.10

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortnunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter- Describe the item you lost- explain how you lost it- tell the v. 10
Dear Mr. Chadha, I am writing this letter to apprise you that I am one of your premium customer and took travel insurance from your company before departure. Unfortunately, I have lost my laptop during my recent visit to Singapore and need your help with the claim settlement. As I understand, all my valuable items were covered for any damage or loss during my journey. This is latest HP Laptop that I purchased last month and have copy of invoice to give you as reference proof. Most probably, I forgot this at the famous United cafe near the airport after my meeting with potential customer. I was getting late for my flight and may be forgot to pickup laptop bag in hurry. Please note I have contacted the cafe and they have confirmed that their ground staff has not received any laptop bag. I would request you to please start the tracking process at the earliest. Also, as per the process if Laptop is not found in 10 days then claim needs to be processed. I look forward for your favorable response and immediate action from your side as my business is getting hampered due to this loss. Yours faithfully, chomu kumar
Dear Mr.
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Chadha
,

I am writing this letter to apprise you that I am one of your premium customer and took travel insurance from your
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company
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before
departure. Unfortunately, I have lost my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
during my recent visit to Singapore and need your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
with the claim settlement.

As I understand, all my valuable items
were covered
for any damage or loss during my journey. This is
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latest
HP
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Laptop
that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
last month and have copy of invoice to give you as reference proof. Most
probably
, I forgot this at the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
United
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
near the airport after my meeting with potential customer. I was getting late for my flight and may be
Consider using a past participle here: "forgotten".
forgot
to pickup
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
bag in hurry.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
note I have contacted the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
and they have confirmed that their ground staff has not received any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
bag. I would request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
the tracking process at the earliest.
Also
, as per the process if
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Laptop
is not found in 10 days then claim needs to
be processed
.

I look forward for your favorable response and immediate action from your side as my business is getting hampered due to this loss.

Yours
faithfully
,

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chomu
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kumar
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS letter On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortnunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter- Describe the item you lost- explain how you lost it- tell the v. 10

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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