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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. You have travel insurance to cover the cost anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of the insurance company. In the letter you should: • describe the item that you lost • explain how you lost it v.11

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. You have travel insurance to cover the cost anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of the insurance company. In the letter you should: • describe the item that you lost • explain how you lost it v. 11

Dear Sir/Madam I would like to make a claim for losing my cellphone and get it refunded by insurance company. Me and my partner was travelling in Bali for a vacation and I lost my iphone 7. It is not a new model but is really important to me because it have all my travel pictures there and I use it for communications. Stayed in Ubud but we wanted to see waterfalls so we took a bus to travel in the jungle. After we started to travel back I notice that my phone wasn’t in my pocket anymore. We were looking around but did not find it anywhere. Then I realized that it might fall out of my pocket when we were crossing a river as it was the most difficult part in our path way back. As I have insurance which is covered for cases like this I would like to make a claim. Unfortunately it can’t be replaced anymore and there is no need to replace it to a new one as it is old model then I think it would be the best to get it refunded for me. Looking forward hearing back to you soon. Kind regards Jenna Smith

Dear Sir/Madam

I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a claim for losing my cellphone and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it refunded by insurance This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form "I" is required here.I
Me
 and my partner was travelling in Bali for a vacation and I lost my Possible spelling mistake found.iPhonephoneiPhonesi phone
iphone
 7. It is not a new model This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 is really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it Did you mean "has"?has
have
 all my travel pictures there and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it for communications.

Stayed in Ubud This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 waterfalls This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we took a bus to travel in the jungle. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to travel back I notice that my phone wasn’t in my pocket anymore. We were looking around This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 did not find it anywhere. Then I realized that it might fall out of my pocket when we were crossing a river as it was the most difficult part in our path way back.

As I have insurance which is covered
 for cases like this I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a claim. Unfortunately it can’t be replaced
 anymore and there is no need to replace it to a new one as it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 model then I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it would be the best to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it refunded for me.

Looking forward hearing back to you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Kind regards

Jenna Smith

0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. You have travel insurance to cover the cost anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of the insurance company. In the letter you should: • describe the item that you lost • explain how you lost it v. 11

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

202 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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