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Your colleague found another job and invited you to his/her farewell party. Unfortunately you are unable to attend it. Write a letter to him/her and say – Why can’t you attend the party? – Why did you enjoy working with him/her? – Offer him/her to v.2

Your colleague found another job and invited you to his/her farewell party. Unfortunately you are unable to attend it. Write a letter to him/her and say – Why can’t you attend the party? – Why did you enjoy working with him/her? – Offer him/her to v. 2

Dear Nikita, II am extremely sorry that I won’t be able to make it to your farewell party. Unfortunately on same day I have a doctor’s appointment scheduled for my mother-in-law. As you are aware, that she is undergoing a treatment for her kidney disorder. It’s difficult to reschedule the appointment at such a short notice as we got this appointment after waiting for 2 months. I must say that, I really enjoyed working with you. We kind off tuned in really well with each other in all the three projects. We became more than co-workers when we enjoyed our life stories while sipping coffee in our short breaks. I really want to make it up to you so let me know any day before you resume for new duties. We can go out for lunch and spend some quality time. I will miss working with you a lot. Lot of love and best wishes for your job. Best Regards, Pooja

Dear Nikita,

II am extremely
 sorry that I won’t be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it to your farewell party.

Unfortunately on same day I have a doctor’s appointment scheduled for my mother-in-law. As you are aware, that she is undergoing a treatment for her kidney disorder. It’s difficult to reschedule the appointment at such a short notice as we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 this appointment after waiting for 2 months.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 say that, I really
 enjoyed working with you. We The word "kind" is an adjective and doesn't fit in this context. Did you mean the adverb "kindly"?kindly
kind
 off tuned in really
 well with each other in all the three projects. We became more than co-workers when we enjoyed our life stories while sipping coffee in our short breaks.

I really
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it up to you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know any day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 you resume for new duties. We can go out for lunch and spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 quality time.

I will miss working with you a lot.

Lot of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 and best wishes for your job.

Best Regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.Poona
Pooja

0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter Your colleague found another job and invited you to his/her farewell party. Unfortunately you are unable to attend it. Write a letter to him/her and say – Why can’t you attend the party? – Why did you enjoy working with him/her? – Offer him/her to v. 2

Letter

American English

9 paragraphs

160 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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