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Your colleague found another job and invited you to his/her farewell party. Unfortunately you are unable to attend it. Write a letter to him/her and say – Why can’t you attend the party? – Why did you enjoy working with him/her? – Offer him/her to v.2

Your colleague found another job and invited you to his/her farewell party. Unfortunately you are unable to attend it. Write a letter to him/her and say – Why can’t you attend the party? – Why did you enjoy working with him/her? – Offer him/her to v. 2
Dear Nikita, II am extremely sorry that I won’t be able to make it to your farewell party. Unfortunately on same day I have a doctor’s appointment scheduled for my mother-in-law. As you are aware, that she is undergoing a treatment for her kidney disorder. It’s difficult to reschedule the appointment at such a short notice as we got this appointment after waiting for 2 months. I must say that, I really enjoyed working with you. We kind off tuned in really well with each other in all the three projects. We became more than co-workers when we enjoyed our life stories while sipping coffee in our short breaks. I really want to make it up to you so let me know any day before you resume for new duties. We can go out for lunch and spend some quality time. I will miss working with you a lot. Lot of love and best wishes for your job. Best Regards, Pooja
Dear Nikita,

II am
extremely
sorry that I won’t be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it to your farewell party.

Unfortunately on same day I have a doctor’s appointment scheduled for my mother-in-law. As you are aware, that she is undergoing a treatment for her kidney disorder. It’s difficult to reschedule the appointment at such a short notice as we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
this appointment after waiting for 2 months.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
say that, I
really
enjoyed working with you. We
The word "kind" is an adjective and doesn't fit in this context. Did you mean the adverb "kindly"?
kind
off tuned in
really
well with each other in all the three projects. We became more than co-workers when we enjoyed our life stories while sipping coffee in our short breaks.

I
really
want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it up to you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know any day
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
you resume for new duties. We can go out for lunch and spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
quality time.

I will miss working with you a lot.

Lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
and best wishes for your job.

Best Regards,

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Pooja
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter Your colleague found another job and invited you to his/her farewell party. Unfortunately you are unable to attend it. Write a letter to him/her and say – Why can’t you attend the party? – Why did you enjoy working with him/her? – Offer him/her to v. 2

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  American English
9 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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