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Write letter to a long time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party-Why you will not be able to attend-How you enjoyed working with him/her-How you will keep contact with him/her v.2

Write letter to a long time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party-Why you will not be able to attend-How you enjoyed working with him/her-How you will keep contact with him/her v. 2
Dear Puja, I hope you are doing well. I am very Surprised to her that you are leaving work very soon. I am going to miss my Colleague very much you are the one in my working career also I am going to miss your good by party because of my holiday in this time I am away from country. I will miss those happy moment spent with you in work place specially those funny talk and searing food in our break time. You always need food for me when we are not having a break in same time. You always support me in my work and so do I. Those moments are beautiful moment of my life and I am going to miss everything, you were very friendly with everyone especially towards me. We are not working together anymore but we will still catchup in phone and other socialmedia, we are already friend in facebook and instagram. I wish you all the best for upcoming future, enjoy where you are. Your Sencerely, Bidur
Dear
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Puja
,

I hope you are doing well. I am
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very
Surprised to her that you are leaving work
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very
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soon
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I
am going to miss my Colleague
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very
much you are the one in my working career
also
I am going to miss your
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good
by party
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because
of my holiday in this time I am away from country.

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I
will miss those happy moment spent with you in work place
specially
those
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funny
talk and searing food in our break time. You always need food for me when we are not having a break in same time. You always support me in my work and
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so
do I. Those moments are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
moment of my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
life and
I am going to miss everything, you were
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very
friendly with everyone
especially
towards me.

We are not working together anymore
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but
we will
still
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catchup
in phone and other
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socialmedia
, we are already friend
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in facebook
and
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instagram
.

I wish you all the best for upcoming future, enjoy where you are.

Your
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Sencerely
,

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Bidur
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS letter Write letter to a long time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party-Why you will not be able to attend-How you enjoyed working with him/her-How you will keep contact with him/her v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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