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Your local newspaper would like to have a new regular weekly feature on a subject of interest for readers Readers are being encouraged to make suggestions sent in an email to the newspaper Write an email to the newspaper In your email suggest a topic that v.2

Your local newspaper would like to have a new regular weekly feature on a subject of interest for readers Readers are being encouraged to make suggestions sent in an email to the newspaper Write an email to the newspaper In your email suggest a topic that v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regards to the new feature that your newspaper is planning to introduce for the readers. As most of the topics are already covered in the daily columns, I would like to recommend to add a weekly movie review column in the newspaper. Every person has a tendency to look for a review of the movie which he or she is planning to watch. This column will provide them answers to all their questions about the performance and rating of the movie. All the readers will be glad to read about the reviews provided by the critics. Moreover, people like to invest their money and time on a movie which is of interest to them. Since all the movies are released on weekly basis, this weekly feature will be perfect to report the movie' s performance at the next day of the release. All other topics like politics, sports and job requirements are already printed by the newspaper daily. I hop you will consider my suggestion regarding the feature. Yours sincerely, Manmeet Kaur
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter
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with regards to
the new feature that your newspaper is planning to introduce for the readers. As most of the topics are already covered in the daily columns, I would like to recommend to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
a weekly
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movie
review column in the newspaper.

Every person has a tendency to look for a review of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
which he or she is planning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
. This column will provide them answers to all their questions about the performance and rating of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
. All the readers will be glad to read about the reviews provided by the critics.

Moreover
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
like to invest their money and time on a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
which is of interest to them. Since all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movies
are released
on weekly basis, this weekly feature will be perfect to report the
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movie&
#039; s performance at the
next
day of the release. All other topics like politics, sports and job requirements are already printed by the newspaper daily.

I hop you will consider my suggestion regarding the feature.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Manmeet
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Kaur
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper would like to have a new regular weekly feature on a subject of interest for readers Readers are being encouraged to make suggestions sent in an email to the newspaper Write an email to the newspaper In your email suggest a topic that v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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