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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student v.51

You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student v. 51
Dear Sir or Madam, My friends and I are your tenants at the Plaza estate and We write to inform you of the challenges we are facing with the house. The house we occupy is the bungalow at 72 Agui Road. It has four bedrooms and there are three of us sharing it. It is a lovely place and suits our purpose as students. However, there are a few things that we need you to look into. The roof is leaking into the living room, leaving our books and other valuables damaged each time it rained. In addition, the compound is always flooded above knee level, even with a tiny rainfall, that no one is able to go out from or come into the premises, whenever it rains. We also find the rent very high and would love to look for another student who would move into the vacant room and share the rent with us. This way we will see a reduction in what each person pays. We will be very happy if you work on this repairs quickly and as well, assent to our request of bringing in an additional person and hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Okoronkwo Alfred.
Dear Sir or Madam,

My friends and I are your tenants at the Plaza
estate and
We write to inform you of the challenges we are facing with the
house
. The
house
we occupy is the bungalow at 72
Agui
Road. It has four bedrooms and there are three of us sharing it. It is a lovely place and suits our purpose as students.
However
, there are a few things that we need you to look into.

The roof is leaking into the living room, leaving our books and other valuables damaged each time it rained.
In addition
, the compound is always flooded above knee level, even with a tiny rainfall, that no one is able to go out from or
come
into the premises, whenever it rains. We
also
find the rent
very
high and would
love
to look for another student who would
move
into the vacant room and share the rent with us. This way we will
see
a reduction in what each person pays.

We will be
very
happy if you work on
this
repairs
quickly
and
as well
, assent to our request of bringing in an additional person and hope to hear from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Okoronkwo
Alfred.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student v. 51

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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