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You would like to learn a foreign language and there is a teacher close to where you live Write a letter to the teacher about the following Explain how did you find out about the teacher Reasons why you want to learn this language Ask how you can meet and v.2

You would like to learn a foreign language and there is a teacher close to where you live Write a letter to the teacher about the following Explain how did you find out about the teacher Reasons why you want to learn this language Ask how you can meet and v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest in learning the French language under your guidance and supervision. One of my office colleague, who is you ex-student have suggested your tutorship and explained to me your teaching methodologies. I am impressed with his eloquent speaking and understanding of a foreign language in a short period. Let me explain to you that why I need to learn this language. My immigration application for Canada has been approved recently and I will be relocating in a couple of months. As I have heard that the French language is the second official mode of communication in Canada and it has become imperative for me to at least know the elementary level. Furthermore, learning this language will increase the prospects of getting a better job in a competitive environment of Canada and will be instrumental in a smooth settlement. I would like to meet yourself to discuss the learning plan. Fortunately, I live nearby to your house and can pass-by at your convenient time. Thanking you in anticipation
Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my interest in learning the French
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
under your guidance and supervision. One of my office colleague, who is you ex-student have suggested your tutorship and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
to me your teaching methodologies. I
am impressed
with his eloquent speaking and understanding of a foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
in a short period.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
to you that why I need to learn this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. My immigration application for Canada has
been approved
recently and I will be relocating in a couple of months. As I have heard that the French
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is the second official mode of communication in Canada and it has become imperative for me to at least know the elementary level.
Furthermore
, learning this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
will increase the prospects of getting a better job in a competitive environment of Canada and will be instrumental in a smooth settlement.

I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
yourself to discuss the learning plan.
Fortunately
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
nearby to your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and can pass-by at your convenient time.

Thanking you in anticipation
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
A foreign language is like a frail, delicate muscle. If you do not use it, it weakens.
Jhumpa Lahiri

IELTS letter You would like to learn a foreign language and there is a teacher close to where you live Write a letter to the teacher about the following Explain how did you find out about the teacher Reasons why you want to learn this language Ask how you can meet and v. 2

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
174 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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