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You visited a town last month and told your friend that you would like to meet. However you could not make it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: express your apologywhy you could not meetmaking arrangement to meet him v.2

You visited a town last month and told your friend that you would like to meet. However you could not make it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: express your apologywhy you could not meetmaking arrangement to meet him v. 2
Dear Kate, I am writing this letter to apologies to you for not able to meet you, During my last month' s visit at your town. Although I was very exited to meet you but because of my work commitment, I had to cancel my plan. Besides all these, accept my sincere apology and gift as well which I am sending with this. As you know, I am working as HR Manager in a multinational company however this was a short business trip and planned suddenly as my boss asked me to join him. While I decided to meet you during my free time whereas management decided team Dinner in a restaurant and I could not denied them as this was my first experience. I am also trying to arrange another trip over there for next month for 4 days so we can spend some quality time together and could make some good memory. Again, I want to say sorry from bottom of my heart for not being able to meet you. Give my regard to everybody in the house however soon i will meet everyone personally. With lots of love, Jessica
Dear Kate,

I am writing this letter
Did you mean "to apologize" (American English) or "to apologise" (British English)?
to apologies
to you for not able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you, During my last
Possible spelling mistake found.
month&
#039; s visit at your town. Although I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
Did you mean "excited" (=enthusiastic) instead of 'exited' (=gone away)?
exited
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of my work commitment, I had to cancel my plan.
Besides
all these, accept my sincere apology and gift
as well
which I am sending with this.

As you know, I am working as HR Manager in a multinational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
however
this was a short business trip and planned
suddenly
as my boss asked me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
him. While I decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you during my free time whereas management decided team Dinner in a restaurant and I could not
The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: "deny"
denied
them as this was my
first
experience.

I am
also
trying to arrange another trip over there for
next
month for 4 days
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
we can spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
quality time together and could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
memory.

Again, I want to say sorry from bottom of my heart for not being able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you. Give my regard to everybody in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
however
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
everyone
personally
.

With lots of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
,

Jessica
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
Learning is a treasure that will follow its owner everywhere.
Chinese Proverb

IELTS letter You visited a town last month and told your friend that you would like to meet. However you could not make it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: express your apologywhy you could not meetmaking arrangement to meet him v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
191 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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