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imagine you are going to an English speaking country to live write a letter yo a rental agency in your letter say what type os a house you need what the house size should be in what area should be located v.2

imagine you are going to an English speaking country to live write a letter yo a rental agency in your letter say what type os a house you need what the house size should be in what area should be located v. 2
Dear sir/madam, I would like to say that I am coming to Canada and wants to settle there. In this concern, I need perfect accommodation there for my family. I am coming on the 20th of the next month so, I need a house that I would prefer nearby a market for household needs, a job sector, and a local community to help me to adjust and tackle daily tasks. I would like to rent a two-bedroom small but furnished home, as I am having my family with me. The kitchen should be in decent condition as my family prefers homemade food rather than street treats. Adding to it, I love to join a job, so the accommodation nearby a bur or train route would be better for my daily journey. Moreover, a nicely decorated home can be suitable for our family as we would rent that for about one and half year. I shall be thankful to you to find out an outstanding location that would match my requirements. Yours sincerely. Ramneek
Dear sir/madam,

I would like to say that I am coming to Canada and wants to settle there. In this concern, I need perfect accommodation there for my family.

I am coming on the 20th of the
next
month
so
, I need a
house
that I would prefer nearby a market for household needs, a job sector, and a local community to
help
me to adjust and tackle daily tasks.

I would like to rent a two-bedroom
small
but
furnished home, as I am having my family with me. The kitchen should be in decent condition as my family prefers homemade food
rather
than street treats. Adding to it, I
love
to
join
a job,
so
the accommodation nearby a bur or train route would be better for my daily journey.
Moreover
, a
nicely
decorated home can be suitable for our family as we would rent that for about one and half year.

I shall be thankful to you to find out an outstanding location that would match my requirements.

Yours
sincerely
.

Ramneek
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS letter imagine you are going to an English speaking country to live write a letter yo a rental agency in your letter say what type os a house you need what the house size should be in what area should be located v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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