imagine you are going to an English speaking country to live write a letter yo a rental agency in your letter say what type os a house you need what the house size should be in what area should be located v.2
imagine you are going to an English speaking country to live write a letter yo a rental agency in your letter say what type os a house you need what the house size should be in what area should be located v. 2
Dear sir/madam,
I would like to say that I am coming to Canada and wants to settle there. In this concern, I need perfect accommodation there for my family.
I am coming on the 20th of the next month so, I need a house that I would prefer nearby a market for household needs, a job sector, and a local community to help me to adjust and tackle daily tasks.
I would like to rent a two-bedroom small but furnished home, as I am having my family with me. The kitchen should be in decent condition as my family prefers homemade food rather than street treats. Adding to it, I love to join a job, so the accommodation nearby a bur or train route would be better for my daily journey. Moreover, a nicely decorated home can be suitable for our family as we would rent that for about one and half year.
I shall be thankful to you to find out an outstanding location that would match my requirements.
Yours sincerely.
Ramneek
Dear sir/madam,
I would like to say that I am coming to Canada and wants to settle there. In this concern, I need perfect accommodation there for my family.
I am coming on the 20th of the
next
month
so
, I need a
house
that I would prefer nearby a market for household needs, a job sector, and a local community to
help
me to adjust and tackle daily tasks.
I would like to rent a two-bedroom
small
but
furnished home, as I am having my family with me. The kitchen should be in decent condition as my family prefers homemade food
rather
than street treats. Adding to it, I
love
to
join
a job,
so
the accommodation nearby a bur or train route would be better for my daily journey.
Moreover
, a
nicely
decorated home can be suitable for our family as we would rent that for about one and half year.
I shall be thankful to you to find out an outstanding location that would match my requirements.
Yours
sincerely
.
Ramneek
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