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You want to learn a language There is a teacher near to where you live Write a letter to the teacher In the letter say how you came to know about him her advertisement in the our sector market explain why you want to learn French language IELTS planning t v.2

You want to learn a language There is a teacher near to where you live Write a letter to the teacher In the letter say how you came to know about him her advertisement in the our sector market explain why you want to learn French language IELTS planning t v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to ask for information about the French course offered by you. I have read your advertisement about learning a foreign language and I would like to get more details about the course such as duration, cost, and suitable timing. Firstly, I wonder if you could give me a small overview of the offered foreign language courses. Actually, I am living in a nearby society of yours and I am planning to migrate to Canada in the next couple of months. Therefore, I would like to learn the French language to communicate with the Quebec province community. Furthermore, I would like to know about the fee structure of the course for the beginner level. Also, I would like to mention here that I am doing a full-time job in private bank, thus I am looking for flexible timing classes. I would really appreciate it if you could provide details information about module vise duration. I look forward to receiving your prompt reply! Yours faithfully, Deepak Sharma
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ask for
information about the French
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
offered by you. I have read your advertisement about learning a foreign language and I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
such as duration, cost, and suitable timing.

Firstly
, I wonder if you could give me a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
overview of the offered foreign language
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
. Actually, I am living in a nearby society of
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
yours and
I am planning to migrate to Canada in the
next
couple of months.
Therefore
, I would like to learn the French language to communicate with the Quebec province community.

Furthermore
, I would like to know about the fee structure of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
for the beginner level.
Also
, I would like to mention here that I am doing a full-time job in private bank,
thus
I am looking for flexible timing classes. I would
really
appreciate it if you could provide
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
information about module vise duration.

I look forward to receiving your prompt reply!

Yours
faithfully
,

Deepak Sharma
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
Knowledge of languages is the doorway to wisdom.
Roger Bacon

IELTS letter You want to learn a language There is a teacher near to where you live Write a letter to the teacher In the letter say how you came to know about him her advertisement in the our sector market explain why you want to learn French language IELTS planning t v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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