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You are working for acompany. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letterExplain why you want to take time off workGive details of the amount of time you needSuggest how your v.2

You are working for acompany. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letterExplain why you want to take time off workGive details of the amount of time you needSuggest how your v. 2
Dear Mr. smith, I am writing to request some leave from november 1st to 10th. As you know, my family lives in London. Recently my father has suffered some hurt problems. after medical tests, doctors understood that his hurt’s vessels could not carry blood properly. so, they want to do surgery. Because I am the older offspring and this is a very vital situation, I want to be near my family in order that I can support them financially and mentally. The operation will be done on november 3rd. However, I have to go sooner to do the registering process. Besides that, I need to stay there one week after surgery to look after my father in the hospital. Although my family members can undertake these responsibilities, my presence is crucial for me to become calm and release my stress. so these are very reasons why I request for ten days working off. I have done all the projects, which I undertook, and asked one of my colleagues to commit my responsibilities in this period. she works in the same sector as me. As a result, she is knowledgable enough for this role. I hope that my request does not cause you any inconvenience. Thanks for your help and support,
Dear Mr. smith,

I am writing to request
some
leave
from
november
1st to 10th.

As you know, my family
lives
in London. Recently my father has suffered
some
hurt problems.
after
medical
tests
, doctors understood that his hurt’s vessels could not carry blood
properly
.
so
, they want to do surgery.
Because
I am the older offspring and this is a
very
vital situation, I want to be near my family in order that I can support them
financially
and mentally.

The operation will
be done
on
november
3rd.
However
, I
have to
go sooner to do the registering process.
Besides
that, I need to stay there one week after surgery to look after my father in the hospital. Although my family members can undertake these responsibilities, my presence is crucial for me to become calm and release my
stress
.
so
these are
very
reasons why I request for ten days working off.

I have done all the projects, which I undertook, and asked one of my colleagues to commit my responsibilities in this period.
she
works in the same sector as me.
As a result
, she is
knowledgable
enough
for this role. I hope that my request does not cause you any inconvenience.

Thanks for your
help
and support,
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS letter You are working for acompany. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letterExplain why you want to take time off workGive details of the amount of time you needSuggest how your v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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