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You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letterDescribe what happened that caused you to miss the flightExplain how missing your flight affected youMake it clear what you would like the airline to do v.8

You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letterDescribe what happened that caused you to miss the flightExplain how missing your flight affected youMake it clear what you would like the airline to do v. 8
Dear sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about missing my flight last week due to a mistake by one of your employees. I was supposed to catch a flight to Kish Island, where I intended to spend four days on a seminar. Unfortunately, your employee at check-in-desk gave me a wrong boarding card. That was too late when I noticed the issue, so I missed the accurate flight and I could not be there at the right time. As a result of the error, I had to change all of my plans as well as my lecture postponed to another day. This caused me great inconvenience because I had to book a new flight the day after which meant that I missed the first day of seminar and I spent an extra $100. As the mistake caused by your company, I hope that you will compensate me for the cost of the additional flight. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully, Azin Rad
Dear sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about missing my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flight
last week due to a mistake by one of your employees.

I
was supposed
to catch a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flight
to
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Kish
Island, where I intended to spend four days on a seminar. Unfortunately, your employee at
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
-in-desk gave me a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
boarding card. That was too late when I noticed the issue,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I missed the accurate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flight
and I could not be there at the right time.

As a result
of the error, I had to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
all of my plans
as well
as my lecture postponed to another day. This caused me great inconvenience
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I had to book a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flight
the day after which meant that I missed the
first
day of seminar and I spent an extra $100.

As the mistake caused by your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, I hope that you will compensate me for the cost of the additional flight.

I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Azin
Rad
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letterDescribe what happened that caused you to miss the flightExplain how missing your flight affected youMake it clear what you would like the airline to do v. 8

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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