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Write a letter to invite your friend to a music concert you are planning to go You should write What is the concert of the music concert When and where is the music concert Why do you think your friend will go to this concert v.2

Write a letter to invite your friend to a music concert you are planning to go You should write What is the concert of the music concert When and where is the music concert Why do you think your friend will go to this concert v. 2
Dear Jane, I hope this letter finds you well. As we haven' t seen each other for a long time, I' d like to see you as soon as possible. Listen! I must tell you about a Pop music concert which is held next week. I have a plan to see each other in the concert. It would be really unforgettable! I' ve read about the concert on the Internet which is held in Spring hall located on Park street. It is on the 1st of the June on next sunday. I' ve heard that the Spring hall is extremely gorgeous and huge. It' s supposed to be exciting. I know, you are a big fan of Pop music concert. Above all, you are very close to where the concert held. Besides, you aren' t busy normally on sundays. I would be really grateful if we could see each other in this event. I hope you can handle your plans to go. I look forward to catching up with you soon! All the best, Sarah Smith
Dear Jane,

I hope this letter finds you well. As we
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haven&
#039; t
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seen
each other for a long time,
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I&
#039; d like to
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see
you as
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soon
as possible. Listen! I
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must
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tell
you about a Pop music
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
concert
which
is held
next
week. I have a plan to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
each other in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
concert
. It would be
really
unforgettable!

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I&
#039; ve read about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
concert
on the Internet which
is held
in Spring hall located on Park street. It is on the 1st of the June on
next
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sunday
.
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I&
#039; ve heard that the Spring hall is
extremely
gorgeous and huge.
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It&
#039; s supposed to be exciting.

I know, you are a
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big
fan of Pop music
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
concert
.
Above all
, you are
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very
close to where the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
concert
held.
Besides
, you
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aren&
#039; t busy
normally
on
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sundays
. I would be
really
grateful if we could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
each other in this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
. I hope you can handle your plans to go.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to catching up with you
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soon
!

All the best,

Sarah Smith
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to invite your friend to a music concert you are planning to go You should write What is the concert of the music concert When and where is the music concert Why do you think your friend will go to this concert v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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